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Flower Girls


Flower Girls
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Copyright: Michelle Maddocks (digimom) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 16 W: 9 N: 10] (56)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-03-25
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: FujiFilm MX-2700
Exposure: f/8, 1/137 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-04-02 14:00
Viewed: 2407
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 16
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two daughters blooming
growing, blowing with the wind
someday will be gone

I have been trying to learn to take better pictures of my children and family: for posterity, for the grandparents, to enjoy. I wonder if anyone has any pointers on this photo? I like the colors and the distance viewed in this, and the wind blowing their hair. I was trying to catch a portion of the place where we were playing on our holiday.
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To Orme: less flowersdigimom 1 04-05 08:42
To zto: yourselfdigimom 2 04-04 04:45
To manny: Thanksdigimom 1 04-03 19:34
To Nina: the eyesdigimom 1 04-03 19:33
To Judy: colorsdigimom 1 04-03 19:31
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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 120 N: 59] (262)
  • [2004-04-02 14:11]
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They are just adorable Michelle. Your youngest daughter reminds me a bit of myself in that age. I had the same pouting mouth and serious look. I think you did very well in capturing your daughter here. I liek the idea of showing the suroundings as well and you have a nice diagonal in the picture. Very nice Michelle i really like it.

I think this is a great capture Michelle. Their expressions are really great - they show two very distinct personalities. Tip: Not always possible, but a fill flash would have worked well. I will try a WS later.

Lovely shot Michelle. I like it a lot, so I spent some time trying to show you how I would present it. It is a different view and you may not agree, but it looks good to me.

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  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 24 N: 1485] (11941)
  • [2004-04-03 6:44]
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Nice portrait! It is already good as it is. Maybe more light on their eyes? Play with the lighting of PS. But really, Michelle, I like this picture mainly because of your COMPOSITION. Great work!

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  • Orme Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 87 W: 6 N: 73] (311)
  • [2004-04-04 10:38]
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I love the clarity of this shot, Michelle. The detail is excellent, especially in their hair. I like the way you captured your daughters' different expressions - which I feel it is because one girl has less flowers! Well done.

Woww lovely photo. Two beautiful and sweet faces. Ur composition is great, pretty colors and u have gave a good depth.

très belle photo. Couleurs et lumières sont douces, la mise au point est parfaite, les petites filles sont très naturelles et adorables.

beautiful shot very lovely angels

Tyanne

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