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J A N I C E
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Copyright: Manuel Librodo (manny) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 24 N: 1485] (11941)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-05-18
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Nikon D200, 60mm f/2.8
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Pretties, Favorite Portraits... [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-05-22 7:37
Viewed: 2370
Favorites: 5 [view]
Points: 42
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Yes...she's back. This time, here's a simple portrait from her. So much character on her, doesn't she? She has a very good personality as well.

I am attaching the BW version to find out from your comments which one is better. Pls take a look...

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Hi Manuel,
Excellent shot!
Very well done.
TFS.
Paulo.

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  • taba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 425 W: 163 N: 314] (2041)
  • [2006-05-22 8:11]

Hi Manuel
Thatīs not a simple portrait, too modest...I think itīs a very good portrait, with the light in perfect conditions.
Good DOF, POV, and composition.
I liked too much, besides the beautiful model.
well done.
Taba

Wow Wow Wow
Nice Model et nice colours
The composition is great
Some noise maybe. Try Neat Image
TFS

Yes, the model has a great "character" and a fantastic glance, but the natural and in the same time exotic look of her skin tone
is gives perfectly by the photographer!!!!! compliment!!!!

Beautiful inviting eye looking at me :) and tender lips. I'm coming.... Great job, Manuel.

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  • niner Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 222 W: 11 N: 0] (2068)
  • [2006-05-22 17:48]

Hi M,
yes she's back, but I can't help it missing her secon eye. Good compo and tone, just mist something white in second eye.

tfs
D

the color for her is so much better, she just exhuberates everything, fire, energy, personality, and sensuality you really have a portrait girl here, her emotions come through her eyes

Hi Manny - I'd say the colour version is better. The BW is too 'harsh', and she looks rather dark (black) in it. Her personality comes out better in colour, it seems livelier to me. Will that do?
Cheers
Cordelia

I study your portraits closely, trying to see how you get that trademark DOF and intimate cropping, the clarity, the rich colours and the beautiful lighting. One day I'll manage something comparable!! This is another fantastic portrait - and the colour version is definitely my preference.

Superb portrait,colours and light.Congrats!

This is a wonderful photo. I like the BW as well. The color seems to really compliment your model. The BW is nice however I think the stronger photo is this one.

Very well done!
Is she thailand girl ?
She is beautiful!

Nina

This has to be one of my favorite pictures ever, the shadows on her face show figure rather then the normal overshadowing of many other pictures. Nice job.

hi Manuel
great shot,i like the contrast and colors alot!!

very well composed!
the shine on the eyes are wonderful!

well done Menuel
regards
FaFa

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  • SRB Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 106 W: 0 N: 51] (803)
  • [2006-09-18 11:37]

Another great portret, but the light is a bit less. the lips and nose have a white stripe and that i don't like. the right side is also a bit to dark, there is no detail in it anymore.
greetz
srb

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  • autumn (49)
  • [2006-10-14 21:38]

The colour version is far more stunning than the bw. In the bw photo her one eye is a dark socket and the colour eye shows way more into the models personality and shows more intensity. Great use of the background colours with the colours the model is wearing!

Sexy licking good!

Very good portrait photo.
I like the eyes of the woman.
....Toba

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 695 W: 2 N: 126] (3446)
  • [2008-01-05 0:43]

nice composition
good colors
well photographed

Excellent, Beautiful portrait. Her eyes telinig much more.

Hello Manuel.

Excellent portrait, very good details, composition and colors.

Regards.
Jose Luis.

I couldn't pass by!
The colours go so well with the content.
The look is with kind of jest.
I liked it a lot!
Thanks!

Hallow Manuel,
Personally I think you have lost too much depth in the BW, its still a nice portrait, however your colour version is more sensual and more overpowering. Well done.
erwin...

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