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Look out there


Look out there
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Copyright: Efi Moore (efimoore) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 16 W: 0 N: 10] (85)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-09
Categories: Friends/Family, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed], Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-10-20 12:31
Viewed: 831
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another portrait of my daughter, pointing out to look at some ducks that were hanging around in the park. (she will probably be ‘staring’ in most of my first digital processing attempts).
After reducing contrast and brightness, tried hot wax coating and this time made the background blur and desaturated.
Any feedbacks are welcome!
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To Dingo: eyesefimoore 1 10-21 20:51
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Wow... now you´ve got it!!The background is perfect!! Another suggestion... the radial blur coming from her finger..why don´t try?
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I like it. You mixed a couple diff filters here and thats good (I find that if you use only one the effect is rather cheap). Nice details, great expression. This is fine work!

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2744 W: 369 N: 2624] (11948)
  • [2004-10-21 15:14]
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Efi, I like the PP work you show here. It is a terrific way to emphasize your main subject. The circular background is simply beautiful.
But I don't like what you did on your daughter's eyes... I'd have used some transparency on them, to let the original picture shine through.

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  • mumek Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 220 W: 2 N: 107] (1833)
  • [2004-10-25 6:38]

Efi!
You have a beautiful daughter.I like very much your pp work.Did you use Photoshop?

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  • Neige Gold Star Critiquer [C: 610 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2004-11-03 23:22]

!!!! Nice-nice... I will come back to this and others you have.

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