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Copyright: Ruben Gironzini (gyre) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 12 W: 0 N: 11] (315)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-04-02
Categories: Abstract
Camera: Olympus Camedia C-3000 Zoom
Exposure: f/3.0, 1/400 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-04-18 14:35
Viewed: 1240
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 22
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  • Judy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 167 W: 94 N: 153] (529)
  • [2004-04-18 14:50]

Welcome to TL Ruben. This is a fantastic first post - I like the angle you have taken of this, and the red hue is really great. Image is nice a clear too. Well done - you have some very artistic talent. The diagonals make this exceptionally interesting.

Hi Ruben, welcome to TL. Very nice first post. The angle is great, and all the lines in it form a great graphical picture. Very good.
May be a note would be nice to tell us what you did with the picture.

Wow! A brillant first post; great use of lines and geometric composition. Especially like how you have the contrasting lighted objects seperating the whole image. Visually it is very easy to read.

Excellent angle and colours. This silhoutte is very recognisable yet original in composition. A note would be good. Great shot.

Wow, you really worked on this one in the digital darkroom of elaborate postprocessing. But the result is worth it - and I think even the original photo wasn't bad. Certainly the idea and the angle prove that you have the eye and the courage. Welcome to TrekLens - keep posting.

Wow! The shapes and lines in this one is incredible, I love the composition / angle.
The colour are perfect and really add to this pic.
Very impressive.

  • Great 
  • Tim Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 188 W: 18 N: 241] (1137)
  • [2004-04-19 18:49]

RubenUberto, I like the geometry of your photo here. Very nice colors and nicely composed. God's best , Tim

Very clever point of view to get this abstract and complex mix of lines. The color changed from blue to red adds still more abstraction. You have a real artistic eye. Diagonals work definitely perfect here. Great.

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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 120 N: 59] (262)
  • [2004-04-28 6:23]

Great picture Ruben. Nice criss cross lines and i really like the red colour and teh hint of orange. very artistic.

Strong composition, Ruben, very intense and very imaginative.

Nice composition! The bright saturated red sky looks unnatural.

Well seen

Garo

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