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Joséphine [III]


Joséphine [III]
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Copyright: Viviane Faguay (Porteplume) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 114 W: 26 N: 51] (545)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-03-04
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Fuji Finepix 1400Z
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Children: Granny's & Grand Dads Treasures, @>-,-`- - - Joséphine & Sarah [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-04-19 7:45
Viewed: 1723
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The background is not very attractive of course, Joséphine was trying to help me cooking, but she had such a lovely look I had to "click" that moment...

Could somebody take her out of my kitchen and set her against a nicer background? :o)))
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To ericat: Merci Erica...Porteplume 2 05-19 09:36
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What a cute kid. The softness of the hair and skin are captured well here. I agree about the bg, but haven't learnt how to do that yet either : )

A very nice subject and well photographed!
I don't bother the background as Josephine's handing that label. It tells us about what is she busy with.

A cutie! Nice portrait of Josephine! What is that with grandparents? A lot of fun, and less worries! Some of my sisters are grandparents, I love to watch them.
Nice challenge in your last sentence. Tried a WS, hope you don't mind.
And how about your yellow car?

What a pretty little treasure you have here. I likt the soft muted colours.

I've done a workshop. Have a look...

She is a beautiful child. Her blushed cheeks and nose looks like she's been playing in the fresh air. Her expression seems like she is wondering "What has Granny in her hands".
It is a lovely portrait, but you are right about the busy background. At times we have to capture the moment, and here she is helping you in the kitchen.

Cette photo ne nous rajeunit pas, le petit boutchou grandit doucement. Belle expression, yeux perçants avec une petite lumière qui s'y reflète. J'aime beaucoup en particulier le ws de Pamela.

What a beautiful and delicate picture, you have really captured her well Viviane, the texture of her skin the clarity and detail of her hair and eyes are fantastic.
Wonderfully shot, I am not going to do a WS I think Pamela has done quite a good one.
Well done.
::M::

A beatiful little girl! Her expression is priceless. I have done a workshop, I hope you find it useful. :)

Belle harmonie des couleurs et Joséphine qui attend patiemment les éléments de la recette pour pouvoir cuisiner avec amour.

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2743 W: 369 N: 2624] (11948)
  • [2004-08-05 11:51]

She really looks like "a lot of life" in your house, Viviane. I think you captured her very well.
I also like what Erica and Pamela have done in their WS. For me, Rinie's WS would have worked better if she had used only the door and the letterbox.

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