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Critiques [Translate]

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• rhymea (144)
• [2006-06-07 7:35]

Hi Betty!
nice shot, good crop. but wire is disturbing.

have a nice day.

- Raima -

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• ferran (0)
• [2006-06-07 8:36]

Hi Betty,

I like the pose of the model and the textures on the wall like a Background. Really wire is a little bit disturbing, but nice composition and great work!

regards,

ferran

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• aqueous (857)
• [2006-06-09 5:42]

Hi Betty.

Nice composition and pose, I personally don't find the wire too distracting. You also did well in breaking up the repetitive brick wall by putting in colour and life. Nice one!

Enjoy TL,Aqueous.

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• Colin2008 (114)
• [2006-12-14 21:07]

I like it, I couldn't even tell this was a self portrait.
But I have to say that the hand over the face is slightly disrupting to the picture, the wire is just fine but it deffintly detracts from the personality of the picture because you cant see your face very well so it doesn't really feel like you were there anymore.