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Walking alone again


Walking alone again
Photo Information
Copyright: Francesco Pascale (frappa76) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 201 W: 51 N: 137] (1346)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-05-11
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Architecture, Decisive Moment, Mood
Camera: Pentax Optio S 4
Exposure: f/4.8, 1/80 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-06-26 7:31
Viewed: 784
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hello, this shot was taken in Kyoto in the Nanzen-ji temple complex. In the BG the big San-mon gate.
Here is a man walking alone but in the starting photo there was a woman too near the stairs, but it was a disturbing element (IMO) and so I cloned out: you can see in the WS the starting photo.

Regards, Francesco

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I like the mood on this photo... and the tones add a lot I think. It seems to be a great place...

Hi Francesco, good pp job, woman disappeared without a trace ;) good choice of b&w.. well done

Alaettin

Very nicely done, Francesco, and good PP work to give this one a very special mood. I agree with Fred that cloning out the lady was a good decision. I might also have cropped a tiny bit more on the left to bring the man a little more in the rule of third but it is a very minor details. Nice PP work. Well done!

Beautiful PP work, Francesco! I also like the way you cropped it to give it a movie format. I much prefer the B&W rendition. Well done!

These temples often look like, or fit in very well with the trees that are surrounding them. The presence of the leafage is covering the whole scene.
The sepia works well. The wide cut very appropriate. Just a pity the leaves on the left side are somewhat blurred.
TFS

Hi Francesco,
il tuo lavoro mi piace molto. Il risultato finale è veramente bello, esalta l'architettura del luogo e crea un'atmosfera surreale.
Very well done.
Ciao
Gigi

beautiful!!! just like that...

a fav!
Sabina

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