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The Boy and the Sun


The Boy and the Sun
Photo Information
Copyright: Marco Neves (Eagle78) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 238 W: 10 N: 29] (652)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-07-20
Categories: Mood
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 5700
Exposure: f/3.9, 1/250 seconds
Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-11-02 13:06
Viewed: 1164
Points: 18
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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 120 N: 59] (262)
  • [2004-11-02 13:46]
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with or without your eye, it is beautifull. This version and the first version, they are diffrent. The first, it was a story, a lovely one. This, is is a lovely sunset, a lovely photo. And the story...it is still beautifull...i am glad you kept it.

Hugs :)

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  • Fisher Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 351 N: 944] (5728)
  • [2004-11-02 14:20]

I like this composition, it's atractive.
Nice one
Mike

This looks much better than the first. Good composition and a gradient of blues and pinks

Both versions are appealing in their own right, Marco, but I guess overall I like this one better (nothing against your eye though ;-). Wonderful simplicity in the composition, and a most delightful degradation of color hues around the sun. And of course I don't need to tell you that you know how to write inspired notes with your photos, do I? Very good.

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  • Neige Gold Star Critiquer [C: 610 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2004-11-02 16:40]

You have deleted the other one :) Of course this one of a kind picture. So simple but the sun make it all in what could be a physical word only - but hopefully there is life aroud, a simple stem carrying fruits for the future. And your note... you are highly philosophical and i like it. There is more than the photo or the eyes.

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  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2004-11-03 9:55]

This is very beautiful!

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  • hojper Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 687 W: 111 N: 847] (4087)
  • [2004-11-04 11:11]

Simplicity rules, eh? But of course whenever we can say that, we forget how difficult it is to achieve harmonious appealing universal inspiring simplicity. You are there, my friend, and that strength will be there even after the sun has set. In this case you did well to remove they eye, but go back to that eye and turn it the other way, and you will see the real sun that makes this one looks like a strawberry flavoured throat bonbon in a purple handkerchief with a piece of straw to one side. Thanks for showing it.

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  • mikoyen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 615 W: 0 N: 162] (5263)
  • [2004-11-05 22:03]

Very nice picture Marco, very well done!
Best regards
Guy

Very touching, Marco. You have the heart of the sun. A beautiful composition and a heart warming and true note to accompany it... :O)

Muito, muito boa sua composição e poesia! poste mais fotos aí! você é bom nisso amigo! aprendemos muito contigo!... abraços. David

A lot, very good his/her composition and poetry! post more pictures there! you are good in that friend! we learned a lot with you!... hugs.

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  • Quark Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1339 W: 10 N: 29] (66)
  • [2004-11-15 16:43]

Wonderful story....
And the picture is so beautiful, what a great and soft light, very nice picture, Marco !

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