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Critiques [Translate]
The concept, the colours, the composition, the POV are all very appealing.
However, I would move those friends from my "A" list to my "B" list if I were you ;-)
Silke
- yas_ank
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(0) - [2006-07-05 20:36]
Hi Paul.
Very nice composition my friend, beautiful flower; well done.
Thanks for sharing.
Yasin.
good use of empty space, lines, vivid color. I like the idea and the title given.
- hamed31568
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(2418) - [2006-07-05 23:48]
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Great work Paul. The flower looks great in this creative background. Well done.
(points to come later)
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- Photograph2u
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- [2006-07-06 12:11]
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Bonjour Paul, ah! voila une nouvelle photo et merci beaucoup :)
Quelle jolie fleur jaune sur ces lattes de bois. Tres grande nettete et belle composition lineaire.
Dommage qu'ils aient oublie cette fleur qu'ils voulaient apporter.
J'aime beaucoup les touches de lumiere un peu plus vive sur les planches, cela ajoute de la dimension.
Bonne journee, voisin, on pourrait se rencontrer un bon jour :)
Yan
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- sugah_bear69
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(4356) - [2006-07-06 17:27]
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This is a very lovely day lily! Day lilies and hibiscus are our summertime bloomers down here they really add a welcome splash of color to the landscape.
Wonderful crisp images, great texture contrasts between the lily, wood and gravel below, vivid colors and composition. TFS.
Fran
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Hello Paul,
Good capture of a daylily. Yellows are sometimes difficult to depict, but you did rather well. Good details and composition.
Best wishes,
Danilo
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Jolie composition Paul... J'aime bien la netteté et la couleur du le coeur de la fleur et bien sûr le jaune éclatant de cette jolie fleur oubliée...
Oh que ça me plait, quelle originalité. Belle définition, c'est une belle réussite. Bravo.
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This image descibes how we all feel sometimes...forgotten
W
I like the idea but I think POV could be a bit different. Somehow, seeing the ground below the bench seems distracting to me.
Katya
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- technogran
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- [2006-09-15 0:04]
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Very nice composition with this perfect lily sitting on the clean wooden boards. It would have been nicer if the boards were a little closer together, but it doesn't really spoil the shot. The colours are lovely and the flower details are sharp. Well done.
Cheers Joan
Beautiful flower, very nice colour--I like that yellow--, lighted by the sun, on that wood bars. Very nice compo, light and colours. Fragile and a little misterious beauty.
TFS,
Andreea
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- foureur
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- [2007-02-04 15:07]
Jolie fleurs aux beaux détails
belle netteté et belle lumière
bravo
jojo
en Francais!!!!!
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- Petro
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(198) - [2008-02-09 14:25]
Beautiful flower. Yes they are daylillies. I have some in my gallery (orange flowers)
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