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Bandon marina


Bandon marina
Photo Information
Copyright: Efi Moore (efimoore) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 16 W: 0 N: 10] (85)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-12
Categories: HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-11-08 23:01
Viewed: 866
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The lovely Bandon marina.
Tried the watercolor sketch action from action central web site. Then some final touches with PSP.
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  • Quark Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1339 W: 10 N: 29] (66)
  • [2004-11-09 11:54]

The composition of this shot is very well chosen and I like the "painting", nice work, Efi !

I like this one very much. It has actually achieved something I know exists in PS but that I haven't found yet in PSP: a cartoon script(comic strip if you prefer). This very detailed kind of coloured drawing imitation reminds me of good Belgian and French Comic Books artists. Can you imagine taking three photos that tell a story, add speech bubbles and design your own photo-comic strip?

This is a good picture Efi, but I think it's missing a focus. The marina makes a nice leading line in the pic, but it doesn't lead to anything. A person leaning on the railing to the right and looking out to sea would've filled that need.

Also, I don't think the watercolour filter and sketch filters suit this pic. I wouldve liked to see this in a more natural way.

Cheers!

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