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Sam in the lines


Sam in the lines
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Copyright: john christopher (antiwheeze) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 37 W: 1 N: 23] (187)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004
Categories: Friends/Family
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-07-29 19:28
Viewed: 583
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
couldnt decide to take the foot out
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  • Great 
  • jcoelho (544)
  • [2006-07-29 19:54]

Amazing work! 5*

Wonderful setting, but to be picky, the shot would be a lot stronger if the child was at least half way up and dominating the pic more. Could also do with more contrast and a small bag of grain or more.

As for the foot, its gotta go. For now you've only left it there because you've said, 'oh look, its my foot.'

Clone tool, Nurse!

Hi John,

I like the composition with the lines of light and woods. I like the different directions (perpendicular) that the lines take in the scene.

Thanks for sharing,
Regards,
Lawrence.

  • Great 
  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 5 N: 389] (1376)
  • [2006-07-30 12:29]

Nice snapshot. Thanks for sharing such a lovely moment of life.

Ciao.

I like this photo too. B&W is a good choice. Ideally, the foot wouldn't be there, but it is, and that's life. Nice job.

  • Great 
  • lopa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1083 W: 244 N: 847] (8927)
  • [2006-08-23 22:44]

Hi John,
WoW!!! Wonderful composition. I like it very much. Well done my friend.TFS.
Lopa

John, I like how the eye travels down to the bottom and discovers the child! I totally missed the foot, until I read about it...no biggie. Thanks again for the warm welcome to TL:)
~Brenda

Great capture, John, B&W was a perfect choice for her sweet face.

Well done,

Alli

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