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Attitude


Attitude
Photo Information
Copyright: Dayna Dennis (daynaken) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 360 W: 36 N: 245] (1289)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-05
Categories: Daily Life, Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Canon 350D (Digital Rebel XT), Canon 18-55mm .028m/0.9ft
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-08-13 2:31
Viewed: 567
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is my younger daughter before she cut all of her hair off.
PP- cropped and blacked out busy background, resized. The background didn't do anything for the portrait so I just took it all out. I thought it gave the protrait a little more drama.


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Hey Dayna,
Let me guess... Your daughter read my note on "Lake Diva" and said, "That's not attitude... You want attitude, I'll give you ATTITUDE!" And then she posed for this pic. Is that how it went? Well it worked. It looks like she's fixin' to pounce on somebody. You've captured it well. I don't know what the background looked like before but the black looks cool. The edges of her hair are kinda raggedy from the PP work but the more you do the easier it gets and the more convincing the effect will become so keep on experimenting with the PP. I've done a workshop on this one to smooth out the edges a little. Give it a look and see what you think.
Terry

Nice work on the PP, though you might try a gausian blur to soften the edges of the work a bit. Just a 3 might do it!

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