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Copyright: Jorn Kildall (kildall) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 29 W: 26 N: 27] (251)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-04-12
Categories: Daily Life, Humorous, Transportation, Event, Decisive Moment, Friends/Family
Camera: Nikon D70, Nikkor AF 70-300 mm
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): BIKE WORLD [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-04-22 15:45
Viewed: 1502
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 18
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This is my youngest daughter, who is learning to ride a bicycle, without the training wheels.. Please notice the shaft/pole behind her. It's a garden tool! Well, it is used keep her on two wheels ;-)
It almost succeeded. She went down several times that afternoon, but she managed to ride all alone without support, later :-)
But she is still falling off her bike from time to time.
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  • hojper Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 687 W: 111 N: 847] (4087)
  • [2004-04-22 16:40]

This is a nice series, Jorn, and I am no fan of photo strips, believe me. The different angles justify the use of several shots to tell a funny little story. And having the punchline shot bigger than the other two is a trick wellknown from the cartoon world. Congratulations.

héhé très sympa ta photo montage!!! bravo bien trouvé excellente idée!!!!

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  • Tim Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 188 W: 18 N: 241] (1137)
  • [2004-04-22 17:07]

Jorn, I remember well helping my kids the first time the training wheels came off. What a delightful collage of photos. I am glad to see smiles and not tears in the picture of your daughter on the ground. Thanks for sharing and God's best to you, Tim

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  • Jep Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 131 W: 16 N: 97] (585)
  • [2004-04-23 2:13]

Oh very fine series you selected for us here - I'm glad you got a smile on the lower one - I also like the "stick" you found for the purpose ;-)

Thanks for sharing Jorn, this funny Daily life, Humorous Transportation Event - I can see it was Decisive moment for you and your Family ;-)

Sorry I had too and I agree with all your categories.

Is the hoe for added balance, or is it a convenient handle for parents? :) Great group of pictures.

This is a really well exectuted series I think Jorn, well done. Of the photos, the one top left is my favorite, as having her far left in the frame has created an interesting line/perspective to where she is going. Your daughter sure looks to be having fun and couldn't look more Danish.

I love this photograph. My kids are 10, 7, and 4 ... so I'm completely living in this space too!

This is a wonderful capture - well focused & a terrific story with the three images!

WOW !!! I've lived this with my daugther and i can imagine how proud are you !!! congratulations ... it's marvelous to see the daugther learning to surpass the challenges of life !!! Your daugther besides being very beautiful is a courageus girl !!! Good luck for you all !!!

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  • dundee (0)
  • [2005-02-16 23:03]

a trowel? are you aware it could have impaled your daughter? i dont really understand why its so necessary.. it seems too dangerous. it almost looks like the girls leg is broken in the bottom picture. other than that, well done. colors are very sharp and crisp. great perspective.

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