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Self Portrait II


Self Portrait II
Photo Information
Copyright: Muhammad Muhsin (mark25) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 359 W: 9 N: 742] (4599)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-08-15
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Olympus E-500 DSLR, ZUIKO DIGITAL 40-150mm 1:3.5-4.5
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/5 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Visions in Black and White... [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-08-23 4:03
Viewed: 535
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
this is part II of my self portrait... it was taken at the same time as the first one... everything is pretty much the same here, half face, one light source.. good old me.. same gattacca-like theme...

it was shot at ISO-200 and i underexposed it by 1 stop.. -1 e.v. to prevent the whites from being blown out..

i look forward to your comments and critiques :)
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Hi Muhammed!
Thnx for your comment with my selfportrait. So now it's my turn for yours.
I like this portret a lot although I think it is a little too dark around the visible eye. I like the first portrait better because of that.
I love the sphere and theme you created!
Lieke

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 558 W: 40 N: 848] (8422)
  • [2006-08-23 4:10]

exellent self piture. great b/w tonal

no Witaj:)))
Ten ładnieszy od wczorajszego...;)
Ale...znowu przepalenie miejscowe na kołnierzyku.Na twarzy swiatło ładne.
Ogólnie na +.
Pozdrawiam żartownisia:)))) autora
andzia

Thoughtful and handsome; strong contrast, very masculin picture.
I would like to see more of your eye whites to the left side of the pupil.
Thanks Muhammad
Huub

Strong contrast and mysterious darkness - interesting portrait style. I'd have liked to have seen a little more focus on the eye and some more of the pupil, but you've succeeded in creating a very moody shot.
Thanks for sharing
Mark

Brilliant portrait. Congratulations.
The use of the natural light is perfect.
The kind of shot I would dream to do.

Good to see you, I love another portrait you did of yourelf. T

Great shot too !
Good model too ;-)
kisanlov
Myriam

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