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Copyright: Mpampis Mantoukas (Xalkida) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 492 W: 114 N: 531] (2753)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-11-24
Categories: Daily Life, Nature
Camera: SONY DSC-P10, Memory Stick 256mb
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-11-24 16:04
Viewed: 918
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Back to Paralia of Chalkis.

When I was there yesterday, I found the opportunity to take some experimental shots, especially trying some unsual for me POV's and taking photos using straight lines. One of them with the straight lines is this!

What do you think?

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wowww...i cannot believe you took that picture yesterday...if only i could show you what it was like here in germany at the same time, you would not envy me!!i like the tones of blue in your picture that you want to play with lines. my major feedback is: the most important line is the horizon line which should be straight and here itīs a bit leaning to the right. also, i am not quite sure about the palm tree on the foreground. if you wanted to include it as a frame, i think i would have put it higher because imo here it looks a bit disturbing.
hope this helps :)
DK

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  • letr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1162 W: 419 N: 1111] (6780)
  • [2004-11-24 17:38]

lines and curves..that's what photograpy is 80% about Mpampis, you mad real good use of them here..and the colors are excellent to ..just a pitty about the tilted horizon here..nevetheless a great capture ..I wish I could be there instead of here in the freezing cold !!

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2743 W: 370 N: 2625] (11952)
  • [2004-11-24 18:05]

Beautiful compo Μπάμπη, but Leon's right about the tilt. Excellent, deep colours. I like the palm tree leaves in it, they add an excellent depth to the image. Well done, TFS.

Great point of view Mpampis, I could sit here for hours and just look at the water and boats.

Excellent clarity and colors. Nice composition. What a nice place! Well done.

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  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 24 N: 1485] (11941)
  • [2004-11-27 12:45]

Well-composed shot with good colors, Like the line ass they lead the eyes.

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  • hojper Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 687 W: 111 N: 847] (4087)
  • [2004-11-28 17:39]

Looks like a cover photo to a guide book from the region. And that's a compliment. It means it makes me want to be there. Very full colours and relaxing view.

Πανέμορφο χρώμα, προοπτική και φωτισμός. Η θάλασσα δε είναι καταπληκτική! Το χρώμα της είναι εξαιρετικό!

Απαλός φωτισμός και χρώματα, εξαιρετική προοπτική και βάθος πεδίου συνθέτου μια εξαιρετική φωτογραφία, μπράβο Μπάμπη.
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