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au bord de l'eau
Photo Information
Copyright: JeanYves Dangreau (JYD) (77)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-06-11
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/5.2, 1/50 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): MOTHER and CHILD [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-08-24 12:41
Viewed: 695
Points: 24
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That's very nice, peacefull photo. Nice vivid colours and dreamy blured photo.I like it's mood.

Hi Jean,

This is a nice picture to play with a bit.
You can try another "crop" for instance, so that the lady and girl are more in the left lower corner.
B/W would also do nice in this one I think....
Not a bad picture at all!

Greetzzz,
Anna

p.s.: I did a workshop on your pic... I hope you like it, please let me know!

I think a soft focus or spot focus and some cropping on the left would be another way of looking at this. The subject is wonderful and I will play with this to practise my PP work. Thanks.

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  • Enric Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 595 W: 55 N: 526] (5870)
  • [2006-08-24 16:02]

A mother with her son. He, playing wiht water; she, thinking about future. I like it a lot.

Enric.

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  • shinee (239)
  • [2006-08-24 21:37]
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I love it..:) Nice compo..It will also look look nice in B&W for a dramatic look..This is really nice.
TFS!
shine

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1303 W: 2 N: 202] (15668)
  • [2006-08-25 1:39]

Beau a regarder? Un endroit paisible

Salut JY,

Très belle photo, elle donne envie d'y mettre les pieds aussi.
Félicitations.

Salutations de Berny.

welcome to TL jean :)
nice composition and mood here
good framing

a little unsharp but it doesn't bother me much :)
points later, all out :)

Bonjour Jean Yves,

En effet c'est une très belle photo, très reposante dans un joli petit coin...
Félicitations à vous,

Seb

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  • lopa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1083 W: 242 N: 847] (8927)
  • [2006-08-27 10:19]

Hi JeanYves,
Excelent composition. Interesting POV. Excellent mood. Well done. TFS.
Lopa

Wonderful mood with soft tone! The ambience is so peaceful and harmonic!Well done!
Regards,
chiping

Hello,
This is a really good picture with a lot of feeling and atmosphere in it. I am going to do a workshop on it for you, although I think it's a very good picture.
Thanks for sharing!

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