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To stand on her feet...


To stand on her feet...
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Copyright: Ali Morshedlou (uranium) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 145 W: 59 N: 156] (878)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Mustek DV4000
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-08-25 16:08
Viewed: 673
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi my dear friends,

Many thanks for your kind comments on my works,
And many thanks for your viewing,(commenting or not),

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"Sana" is my little cousin,She is so sweet and very cute,
I can say I never seen such a sweet baby ever,
She always smiles,in any condition,busy or quiet,And anyone seen her loves her,
I took this in my uncle's home last week,when we went for a "goodbye party" for one of my cousins,who wanted to go to Canada,with her husband,
My dear cousin, Sana,Like always did sweet works,
And one of them was walking on her fingers,I also should say she's less than one years old,
And she can't stay on her feet with no help;
Anyway I took just one picture from her walking,
And the result wasn't good,though I changed it a lot,to reach this one,
Totally my camera doesn't take good photos in dark places,
Best photos of my camera are taken in sunshine,

I know the sharpness of this picture is not too good,
But I guess the subject is enough strong to hide SOME problems in my picture,

And I did many works on it in PS,And I just explain important works:

-changing brightness by levels to reach one more bright picture,
-changing colors by "variations",making picture more red and yellow
-Making a NEAT IMAGE,
-changing contrast and sturation many times continuesly,
-bluring background by "gaussian blur" & "blur" tool,
-making back ground monotone by "brush" tool in color mode,
-making hands monotone with other color,
-changing feet colors and making it neater by "blur","clone stamp"&"brush" tool,
-adding "Radial blur" effect just on background,
-bluring edges,
-making the around the picture more dark by "dodge" tool,
-NEAT IMAGE again,
-making border,
-placing signature,
-resizing,saving

(I did some of this works many times)

And also I posted original version to its workshop,
You can see changes and compare yourself,

Many thanks for reading this note,
Many thanks for your critiques,
EVERY critique is welcome,
Many thanks for viewing,
I wish you enjoy it,

Be happy....

Ali...
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  • Josine Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 922 W: 21 N: 652] (4069)
  • [2006-08-25 17:07]

Very unusual and Artistic! Nice ! bye bye
Josine
points a little later

Hi Ali,
Nicely captured and great PP works;
Creative result.

Ben Lakitan

its very sweet and unusual!

Hello Ali,
Excellent PP work. Lovely soft look with good colour. TFS,
David
Many thanks for your comment on
Cliff Grounds VI

This is wonderfully artistic Ali,
The colours are good. framing is spot on. The effect of the image really draws the eyes into it. Excellent notes.

TFS. have a great weekend.

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5693 W: 197 N: 2450] (9667)
  • [2006-08-27 10:10]

Hi Ali,

Taste of the shot, different in details
a very detailed picture, the effects
they create a beautiful look. Taste of innovations.
Congratulations

Sérgio

bonsoir,

excellent travail de composition
bravo

Arnaud

You captured a beautiful moment here
A wonderful shot with a beautiful view.
John T

Hi Ali, looking at the original, you did a tremendous work on the photo and the end-result is very good. Here the blur works quite well and the colours are great!

Thx for sharing. Yan :)

ps: many thx for your review on "Forest Creek - HDR". I am very pleased that you like my first experiment with HDR.

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  • iGirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 116 W: 29 N: 112] (610)
  • [2006-10-11 13:51]

Hi Ali, I love the pose and the post-processing! The blurriness does not bother me because everything else is so well-done. It is artsy, like a painting.

Thanks for sharing!

Erin

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