Feeling Small

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• mark25 (4607)
• [2006-08-31 3:52]
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how about the following lines for a whisper...

Walk with me now under the stars
For it's a clear and easy pleasure
And be happy in my company
For I love you without measure
Walk with me now under the stars
It's a safe and easy pleasure
It seems we can be happy now
It's late but it ain't never
It seems we can be happy now
Be it better late than never

Sweetheart, come...

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again a great photo with great depth and a feeling of loneliness to it!! well done!

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• waterdroplet (0)
• [2006-08-31 3:58]
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I've written about it in other critiques as well, and I'm gonna repeat it: The first, by far, thing to consider in portraits is whether they look candid or not. If a portrait is not "believable", then what's the point. And you have done a great job, the loneliness is conveyed 100%

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• anjhello (4660)
• [2006-08-31 4:53]

hi! nice black and white portrait.. nicely done.. thanks for sharing (",)

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• rewshearer (20976)
• [2006-08-31 5:36]

Hi Lieke
Not bad, good composition, light, pose and expression. My only concern is that the subject's only visible eye is not sharply in focus, which takes away much of the image's power.
Even so, it's good work, thanks for sharing
Rew

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• wenqing (11857)
• [2006-09-08 9:39]

love the mood here lieke :)
excellent b/w portrait