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Smiling Angel - Shahnaz -


Smiling Angel - Shahnaz -
Photo Information
Copyright: Boniangga Anugrah (BonBon) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 17 W: 4 N: 19] (401)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-09-05
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL, Canon EF 135mm f/2.8 Soft Focus, Compact Flash 2G, UV
Exposure: f/11, 1/4 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-09-16 12:24
Viewed: 594
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi there guys, I finally finished my portfolio and I will try to upload a few of my latest artwork to treklens. Looking forward to hear critics and comments from you guys, I did some experiments with slow speed to get this stunning effect, a semi-motion for the hair. Then I finished it with a minor editing.

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  • Good 
  • nazer (23)
  • [2006-09-16 12:35]

great job bro..

salam

nazer

Great Job. Lovely model on a lovely portrait. i like the color its very warm to eye. the hair is a little bit distracting but still natural and it comes out more effective. goodwork my friend-jon

Great Shot! Cute model, i guess she's my angel hehe jk. TFS! :)

  • Great 
  • KellEy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 401 W: 48 N: 170] (2074)
  • [2006-09-16 15:43]

The movement is awesome.
I think it's a little dark.
The composition putting her smile in place for the "rule of thirds" is fabulous.
Well done.

yes, this is nice.
great lighting control and good POV and DOV.
just maybe... you need more lighting to her right face... its to dark. you loosing her hair and her face detail.
tfs
Haldian

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