Tracks In The Sky

Critiques [Translate]

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• JohnTulip (35294)
• [2006-09-18 13:58]

Great playfull line structure, Joe Batista! Special.
John T

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• cstathoulis (13325)
• [2006-09-18 14:09]

Hi Joe,

Great B&W image!! Great contrast and POV!
Well done!!

Constantinos

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• csuebele (5403)
• [2006-09-18 14:15]

Great lines. Love the toning too.

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• KIZIL_BARON (607)
• [2006-09-18 14:15]

good building but i think you can rework it.
because it overexp and corner of the building is not in it.

see ya.

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• pablominto (27446)
• [2006-09-18 14:25]

Hello Joe,
Pleasant geometry!
Good point of view is making the exciting lines work well together...
B&W is very suitable, colour would probably not work so well!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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• hay_kes (61420)
• [2006-09-18 16:13]

Hi Joe,
Great structure shot.Nice composition and amazing lights. Congratulations,

hAyAti

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• puffy (16627)
• [2006-09-18 17:43]

Excellent POV Joe, good choice of b/w, I like the contrast... well captured,

Cheers,
Sweety

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• Tintin (1982)
• [2006-09-18 20:22]
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Very nice architectural shot, Joe. I like your composition but I think it is a bit dark as we cannot see some of the details on the building. I don't know if it is because of your PP work or if the exposure was not quite right to start with. I like the very white sky which gives a very artistic feel to this picture. I might have cloned out the bit of tree coming out on the left...I know I am being very nit-picky tonight. Well done!

P.S. Is this the new building on Queen Street just west of University or is it another one? Just curious!

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• linus (11318)
• [2006-09-18 21:48]

Hi Joe,
Superb B&W. The high contrast format really brings out this one. Well done.
Sunil

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• hamed31568 (2437)
• [2006-09-19 0:28]

excellent composition, strong contrast. very attractive. well done joe.

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• f0cus (99)
• [2006-09-19 2:35]

Perfect POV , nice effect and nice curves.
Congratulations!

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• pozaru (19804)
• [2006-09-19 4:07]

Excellent image, Joe !
I love the high contrast and the tones of this beautiful graphism.

stay well,
v
ps.I'm not sure about the inner gray frame/shadow.

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• diana (1115)
• [2006-09-19 5:48]

Hi Joe!!

Great perspective!! Love the structure and the high contrast!!!It´s a great work!

Thanks for sharing with us
diana

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• wenqing (11857)
• [2006-09-19 9:09]

good graphical composition here joe
excellent urban work :)

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• jan515 (17706)
• [2006-09-19 11:16]

Hello Joe my friend,
and lines, very clear details purify a photo with wonderful perspective. Wonderfully you here us represented. Thanks and beautiful ones of greetings.
Janusz

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• Ilir (5119)
• [2006-09-19 11:28]

You chose a very appropriate angle for this one, bringing out the curvy part. Nice choice of dark sepia and good framing. Well done.

A.

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• Emma (10153)
• [2006-09-19 13:08]

Hello Joe,
A marvelous color. Perfect light and detail. Very good composition and a very interesting picture. Congratulate. And kind regards.

Eva

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• zokakelt (1397)
• [2006-09-19 19:15]

Excellent photo, great graphical composition. Very good view point.
Great work.
Zoran

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• cobratan (1240)
• [2006-09-20 20:54]

Great B&W image,i like the angle effect of this shot.TFS.
Mel

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• tournesol (12864)
• [2006-09-22 13:59]

Great architecture shot, Joe! More than just a picture from the building, you created your own vision by choosing high key. The composition is also excellent, a very nice flow in the image. Excellent!

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• napdsp (622)
• [2006-09-23 6:35]

Wonderful silhouette of architecture. Wonderful curves and lines. TFS.

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• eyesthetix (8714)
• [2006-09-23 9:24]

Very brilliant! Solid visual impact!
Well done.
best regards, Daniel

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• randomcameraguy (1251)
• [2006-09-23 14:24]

nice shot of my neighbour Joe! I like your high contrast presentation. Well done.

af

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• chrisJ (45590)
• [2006-09-23 23:52]

Hi Joe

Fantastic graphism & wonderful curves. Looks almost like a lithograph. Tfs!

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• Silke (23647)
• [2006-09-26 19:26]

Interesting study in contrasts, Joe, with lovely textures working well for you. Great comp, of course and I like the framing (which adds a lot)
TFS
Silke

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• rosana (3319)
• [2006-09-27 23:51]

Excellent compo Joe and also you b/w is of excellent quality, good work .

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• gnc (1449)
• [2007-02-15 18:37]

Nice graphical composition, interesting architecture, I like the stark contrast that enhances the forms. Well done!

rgds,
cristian