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Copyright: shahid najmi (shahx) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 88 W: 34 N: 58] (656)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-11-16
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 5900
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-09-20 12:03
Viewed: 529
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I clicked this one while coming back from Nainital once. It was a field with flower.
I could capture only this one because the owner did not allow us to step into the field at all.
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I think this is a very lovely flower photo. I love the green yellow colourscheme! Lovely dov and cool to see that on the left are some persons and on the right a tree. There is alot of relaxing in this photo!

Hi Shahid
A shot with potential. Sharpness and colour are good, as is subject.
The composition lacks some interest. Be careful of putting your subject in the middle of the shot. It is less pleasing than if you follow the 1/3rds rule.
The other issue is your overexposed background. It is so strongly washed-out that it has affected the colours and edges of the flower. Perhaps if you had chosen a different point-of-view you could have eliminated the brightness behind; or the use of a polarizer, if you have one available.
I realise that this was the only chance you had to get the photo.
regards
Rew

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