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Try To See


Try To See
Photo Information
Copyright: Ergun Esin (pachanoi11) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 12 W: 1 N: 0] (131)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-12-03
Categories: Experimental
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-12-07 15:01
Viewed: 726
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another work trying to see what I am, how to recognize, how to behave myself, how to think... how to be. Is this what I am?
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Well done pp work. I like it. You looks hard, but good.

My vote for your pp.
Pamela

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3281 W: 268 N: 7782] (33212)
  • [2004-12-07 15:15]
  • [+]

Is this what you are? Only you can answer that!! Very good PP work. Well done, Janice

Well this time you don't look so angry;-) ...but all it's becouse of "effect hallo" you've got strong eyebrows which are to down and makes you look as angry. Besides You are taking photos from point (a litlle from up) which is often taken by viewer as pics of man getting angry...sorry (this part of comment is conected to ur previous photo)

Happily this time You look (also your look) as man who concentrated on something or is a kind of thinker. So not bad!
Nice effect but it suffer a little (softly) on lack of something deeper.
Your note sems to be very not unanswerable;-) Who are You??? Your own look? i don't think so! Your behaving? i don't think so either
Congratulations for idea! it make to stop and think a little

Expérience réussie! Portrait intéressant par son traitement de l'image. J'aime bien!
Bye, Jacques

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