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Dunkles zu sagen


Dunkles zu sagen
Photo Information
Copyright: Sarah Kroepfl (Suerte) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 494 W: 59 N: 227] (3032)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-05-24
Categories: Artwork, Experimental
Camera: Minolta Dynax 4, Minolta AF 28-100/ 3.5-5.6, Kodak 200
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-09-24 15:52
Viewed: 1381
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
There was a photo of 2 faces which almost looked like one , with the copy tool i put them into the stones and sea, i added the sepia tone and the frame, all in adobe photoshop 7.0


DUNKLES ZU SAGEN
INGEBORG BACHMANN

Hören Sie das Gedicht
Wie Orpheus spiel ich
auf den Saiten des Lebens den Tod
und in die Schönheit der Erde
und deiner Augen, die den Himmel verwalten,
weiß ich nur Dunkles zu sagen.

Vergiß nicht, daß auch du, plötzlich,
an jenem Morgen, als dein Lager
noch naß war von Tau und die Nelke
an deinem Herzen schlief,
den dunklen Fluß sahst,
der an dir vorbeizog.

Die Saite des Schweigens
gespannt auf die Welle von Blut,
griff ich dein tönendes Herz.
Verwandelt ward deine Locke
ins Schattenhaar der Nacht,
der Finsternis schwarze Flocken
beschneiten dein Antlitz.

Und ich gehör dir nicht zu.
Beide klagen wir nun.

Aber wie Orpheus weiß ich
auf der Seite des Todes das Leben,
und mir blaut
dein für immer geschlossenes Aug.


DIZER TREVAS

Como Orfeu, toco
a morte nas cordas da vida
e à beleza do mundo
e dos teus olhos que regem o céu
só sei dizer trevas.

Não te esqueças que também tu, subitamente,
naquela manhã, quando o teu leito
estava ainda húmido de orvalho e o cravo
dormia no teu coração,
viste o rio negro
passar por ti.
Com a corda do silêncio
tensa sobre a onda de sangue,
dedilhei o teu coração vibrante.
A tua madeixa transformou-se
na cabeleira de sombras da noite,
os flocos negros da escuridão
nevavam sobre o teu rosto.
E eu não te pertenço.
Ambos nos lamentamos agora.

Mas, como Orfeu, sei
a vida ao lado da morte,
e revejo-me no azul
dos teus olhos fechados para sempre.

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Hi Sarah,
Very good Artwork .Beautiful detail and colours.
Best Wishes,
Deniz.

Intriguing work which works on many levels. I find the combo of poetry and artwork worthy of longer than just a fleeting moments contemplation.
Well done pp work.
Cheers
Otto

Hi Sarah,
Very creative work.wonderful pic.
Shöne arbeit.
Vielen Dank!

hAyAti

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1843 W: 39 N: 465] (4828)
  • [2006-09-25 8:40]

A dream, a passion, or a moment which is leaving me now........

This is such a sensual image; beautiful composition to capture time into pixles. Nice work done Sarah, you really live with your dreams.

Thanks for sharing a creative piece of art.

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  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1320 W: 31 N: 1634] (9994)
  • [2006-09-25 15:54]

Strange but beautiful. Love the colours and textures. Great PP work

TFS

Karan

Good morning Sarah,
Just time for a quick visit.
Nice presentation. enjoy the rest of the week.

Hi Sarah,
Intriguing picture. Hard to say whats in it. That make the shot very interesting and full of tension. Well dione Sarah!
Hans

Hi Sarah
Excellent artistic photograph. I want to learn the technique from you.
Color in this image is great.

Bye
Shahbaz

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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 896 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2006-09-29 2:58]
  • [+]

wow... I love the tones... are there some eyes? I think I see something... wow! beautiful!

anca

hi sarah,

i can't speak anything to Expression all your portrait.
"fantastic" thats the 1st word coming from my mouth.

keep in touch.
haldian

hello Sarah

Very pretty for this arrangement. In large size one does not distinguish the subject correctly but in small size one sees it. Beautiful success cheer.
jp

Hey Sarah!

Very abstract compo you got here. It's quiet hard to detect any remains of a face for me; but I think that doesn't matter at all :)
The counterpoints of blacks and orange(s) is delicious (seems to be a favorite of yours as I've seen so far).

Sehr beeindruckend im wahrsten Sinne
(Very impressive, taken literally)

Regards and TFS
Albatros

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