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Desire


Desire
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Copyright: Agata Ornafa (eselu) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 2] (508)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-09-30
Categories: Portrait
Camera: nikon d40, 18-55mm
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/10 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): ASPECTS OF MAN [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-10-04 11:29
Viewed: 701
Points: 25
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Ruin - Cytadela - Poznan. Charlie and me. Me and Charlie.
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Woow, what a sexy pic...
very nice, the black and wite was very nice.

this pic is excellent in the compose, i like it so much, sensual... sexy... but not offensive... i think that a little more of realism in the faces of the models, but is only a suggestion, the shot is so great... congratulations, TFS

I love the mood, The B&W, composition, sensuality.

I have to agree with the above though, the expression on the faces looks too strained or contrived. Otherwise and excellent shot.

Thanks,
David

Fantastic picture, great B&W picture. Agreeing with drackness and jamfest, the model poses are great but could work on expression. It really enhances a picture alot more. Another suggestion, it seems like a dance step, if they could allow more curvations of the body formations might serve a better outcome too. Gd Pic overall!
Steph

Sexy Shot but serious !
Have a good time !
Saman

Buena escena
buen escenario
Saludos

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 52 N: 416] (10108)
  • [2006-10-04 13:02]

WOW! where can i get a model like them? :)
lovely shot, went well will Black and
white. TFS.

Shogun

Hi
very beatiful b&w foto...

niesamowite zdjecie!gratulacje!

Lovely photo... gentle and powerful! ;)
Nice done! ;)

Salute.
Iv / JAZZer

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1738 W: 5 N: 382] (1348)
  • [2006-10-05 10:17]

Veru nice compostion in monochrome. Good control on light and contrast. Well framed, expressive and bold image.

Thanks for sharing a passionate moment from life.

excellent photo Agata, really well executed.

jaco

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  • rebel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 238 W: 72 N: 16] (992)
  • [2007-01-16 12:14]

jedno zdjęcie mówi wiecej niż sto słów.
Fajnie widac uczucia.
Marcin

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