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THREE in ONE


THREE in ONE
Photo Information
Copyright: Ratna Kong (Ratna) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 221 W: 68 N: 204] (1231)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-10-08
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon EOS 300D
Exposure: f/4, 1/640 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-10-08 9:15
Viewed: 1432
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 91
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Three in one, I combined three pictures then got one. All those three were the same bird.
I don’t know much bout this bird, but you can find it everywhere in Singapore. The bird was about 20 m from me. I shot it with 200 mm focal length, just want to have my very first experience with a telephoto lens ( well, quite heavy… =))
It’s just a borrowed lens, which providing 70-200 mm.

PP work:
Cropped, adjusted curve, framed.
The right one was on its exact position, while the other two were imported then pasted.

Any comment/critic/advise are welcome.
Thank you.

lenore82, Jorge, mortcdz, wolfke74, molas, joebatista, sarahc, harpya, lilimih33, kbeall, xuaxo, aysm, broadcaster, goomer, mesquens1 has marked this note useful
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To harpya: Hello SergioRatna 1 10-16 21:55
To Janone: Hi JanRatna 1 10-12 09:57
To joebatista: Hi JoeRatna 1 10-12 09:54
To clic: Bonjour RobertRatna 1 10-11 21:53
To pankajbajpai: Thanks :)Ratna 1 10-11 06:22
To tracer: =)Ratna 1 10-11 01:47
To gavindya: =)Ratna 1 10-10 08:37
To wolfke74: ThanksRatna 3 10-10 08:35
To csuebele: Hi ChuckRatna 1 10-09 11:46
To cyiu: Hi ChrisRatna 1 10-08 22:12
To mortcdz: Hi MarkRatna 1 10-08 22:09
To Jorge: ThanksRatna 1 10-08 12:25
To Shogun: Hi ShogunRatna 1 10-08 12:23
To jickersdalida: Hi JickRatna 1 10-08 12:09
To gabbypal: Hi JanosRatna 1 10-08 11:22
To Berlingo: =)Ratna 1 10-08 10:40
To mperla: Hi MagdaRatna 1 10-08 10:13
To lenore82: =)Ratna 1 10-08 10:07
To magda_indigo: =)Ratna 1 10-08 09:53
To Sarah171: Hi JoeRatna 1 10-08 09:27
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Very interesting composition Ratna. Could perhaps be a bit sharper but I really like the way you put this together. The colourful beaks are pleasing to the eye. I also like your choice of frame.

Great fun image, creative but so full of humour, thanx, M, (*_*)

Impressive PP work Ratna. The composition is well balanced and the colours and DoF are awesome. Good Job :)
Annick

vewry nice but not sharp

Very good composition. To smile obligatory. Thank you!
Stéphane

Great idea. Cute. Nicely done. Janos

Good PP work! I didnt noticed it. Clever idea. Good job! :)

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 832 W: 52 N: 418] (10391)
  • [2006-10-08 11:45]
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hi Ratna. nice subject and framing. not that sharp but still a good shot. :)TFS.

Shogun

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  • Jorge Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 128 W: 6 N: 26] (417)
  • [2006-10-08 12:11]
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I agree with mperla that your image is not very sharp. But I think it is a great image. Good colors, image centered and also good frame!
TFS,
Jorge

Well composed - its hard to see that this is anything but three different birds sitting next to each other. Colours are good, details are a little soft but nothing major, and the framing complements the colours in the picture. Nice work.
Thanks for sharing
Mark

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  • cyiu Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 228 W: 0 N: 47] (1122)
  • [2006-10-08 18:46]
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Hi Ratna, great shot taken here nice POV

Well Done

Chris

Good pp work. Real nice image.

hi ratna,

very nice pic ratna.

haldian

that is very cute and did a very good job combining them, I really like it. Only the middle bird is a little bit fuzzy - love your composition

I did some workshop to sharpen the middle one

very very clever eh. they look funny too. =)

well composed shot. the three birds look nice together. the pov is very good. nice dof.
tfs
regards
pankaj

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  • clic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 758 W: 0 N: 206] (4714)
  • [2006-10-11 8:55]
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Bonjour Ratna
Fine art picture because of "gossiping" trio perched on parallel lines. Quite evocative of human behaviour among neighbourhood!!
Very funny!
Cheers.
Robert

Fantastic shot Ratna

I love the way this photo looks
and your frame is just perfect for it.

Excellent
TFS

Hello Ratna.
Very well performed trio.!
I was 10 years ago for 5 months in Singapore for a project. So I've seen that species may times, as well many other beautiful birds.
Have some nice 'singers' on video.
Jan

Good composition and good DOF!I think the birds had found theirs comfortable "bench" at last!Good POV!
Regards,
chiping

Hi Ratna,
This is a very cute photo. You have done a great job putting all these pictures together. I would never have guessed! Nice work.
Sarah

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  • aysm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 86 W: 0 N: 41] (493)
  • [2006-10-14 15:47]

Job well done...I may borrow your idea.
Albert

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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 909 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2006-10-16 2:21]

wow excellent! so soft and so casual:)) very good capture, congrats!

anca

Hello Ratna,

Beautiful visual,
beautiful composition,
I adored the trio, very attractive
colors, details and sharpened here
they are wonderful.
Congratulations

Sérgio

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2733 W: 263 N: 864] (8653)
  • [2006-10-17 7:08]

Great pp work! Excellent compo! This trio is very funny! Bravo! Michel

A nicely shot. TFS.

Beautiful composition and great detail. I like the various poses of the birds and they are so cute!
-Lara

very nice and sharp pic ! i like the black of the birds and the white. the unsharp bg fits very well. good framing as well

daniel

Hello Ratna! This is wonderful composition with a great colours and contrast! Perfect POV! Nice shot! Well done! Lili

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  • kbeall Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 532 W: 109 N: 902] (3580)
  • [2006-11-01 21:28]

Hi Ratna,
Great imagination, using the same bird as model. Nice detail, and framing as well.
All the best,
Karen

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  • xuaxo Gold Star Critiquer [C: 53 W: 0 N: 16] (101)
  • [2006-11-04 15:04]

Wonderful PP work. Well done.
F

Beautiful composition and nicely chosen frame to increase the impact of the image. Regards, Yvonne

Great shot ! congratulations!
Thanks you for sharing !
Kisanlov
Myriam

Hi Ratna
Nice composition well done

FaTiH

Merhaba Ratna
Perfect work. Good time. I like composition.
TFS

Kerem

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  • sleger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 564 W: 57 N: 181] (3549)
  • [2006-12-30 14:10]

Nice work, the postprocessing doesnt show at all. I was shure these were three different birds.
It is a lovely picture.

Sylvain

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1119 W: 62 N: 167] (27935)
  • [2007-01-15 16:10]

Excellent compositiom of your image, original subject, yes youhave talent in photography Ratna.

Merhaba Ratna.
A very good catch, well seen.
Thanks for sharing and best regards.

Yasin.

Hello Ratna,
Nice use of the principle of three!
"They" are so funny, well done on the post processing...
I like the composition, simple but effective!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • nana Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 129 W: 1 N: 116] (908)
  • [2007-01-29 4:06]

I love what you have done here I would not have guessed you had photoshoped it well done:)

Nana

What a nice trio! They're very funny! You did a good PP job, because I've been thinking this was a 'real' photo before reading your note. Nice frame too!!

TFS!
MW

You had me fooled at first. I really thought there were three birds here. Well done on your post processing skils. I like the humour in this one.

The composition is wonderful! The frame looks good too. I know they can learn how to speak phrases or words. i just forgot what htey are called.

jowhite

Hello Ratna. Highly creative, excelent P.P. work. Thanks for sharing.

Regards Phil.

Beautiful capture Ratna.
This is great.

Regards Mark

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  • lopa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1083 W: 244 N: 847] (8927)
  • [2007-05-03 5:53]

Hi Ratna,
Excellent composition and PP work. It works here well. Good colour with sharp focus.
TFS
Lopa
:)

Excellent capture. Great composition and DOF and choice of frame. Great work!

Hello Ratna.

Excellent picture, nice composition and colors.

Regards.
Jose Luis.

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1377 W: 0 N: 1677] (13583)
  • [2007-12-10 12:02]

Very well done Ratna.
jan

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