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Waiting for a job


Waiting for a job
Photo Information
Copyright: Fidel Chirtes (smena) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 171 W: 94 N: 14] (483)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08-30
Categories: Mood
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 5700
Exposure: f/4.7
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Chairs and benches [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-10-17 7:59
Viewed: 621
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken early in the morning, Black Sea Coast, Vama Veche Beach.
Resized for TL, thats all.
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To SylFondacci: 3 or 4 ? (you know what I mean)smena 5 10-26 13:34
To fotobram: jobs ?smena 1 10-19 10:50
To SunToucher: Bad crop ?smena 1 10-17 13:36
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Hi Fidel,
Lovely composition with great colors and stunning light. Maybe a tad more space would have shown the backrest of the chairs as well.
TFS,
Niek

PERFECT, BRAVO...
light, graphy, rusty tones... alla r beautiful...
bw

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3555 W: 736 N: 2391] (18990)
  • [2006-10-18 3:53]

Lumina aia e chiar superba !
Frumoasa compozitie si culori.


v

Waiting for a paint job ?
A bit busy composition for this type of shot, but I can see a pattern :-)

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  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2006-10-24 21:17]

I had never come across your gallery before, Fidel, so I decided to take a quick tour and this picture attracted me for the light in it and the lovely composition. However, I am wondering if you should not crop a bit on the right to eliminate the fourth chair; I have often been told that 3 objects in a picture was a better number than 4. Well done!

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  • jrj Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 162 W: 14 N: 82] (724)
  • [2006-10-26 3:09]

hi fidel
Good graphic details and setting, creative shooting

Hi Fidel,
If this is the one, let me tell you that I like your compo as it is.
Good one with nice colours !
Sylvie

A very artyistic presentation! I enjoy that a lot! The crop very close on the detail is pleasant! Original with nice texture on the rust!

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  • Meli Silver Star Critiquer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 0] (150)
  • [2006-11-20 14:29]

Hello Fidel :)
I like much this composition and the repetition of color and form, weel done!
Méli

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