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A look


A look
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Copyright: Dr Qadir Sherif (qadirsh) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 25 W: 3 N: 13] (89)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-10-23
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-10-24 22:08
Viewed: 586
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another portrait was taken in open space with sunshine as lighting source of course with some exposure compensation adjustment. Tried to keep every thing natural......
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Dear Qadir Sahib,
Eid Mubarik. Nice shot. I like the innocent look on the face of the child. You have mentioned that you used open sunshine as the lighting source to keep everything natural. I believe the shot could have been improved if you would have used sunlight as the only light source early morning or at around dusk (and not at 3:00 PM as can be read from EXIF).The light is low at these times and the shadows of the nose that now falls at around 45 degree angle and the shadows of the eye brow area that falls on the cheeks, just below the eyes could have been avoided. Other option was to use the fill in flash ( Which from your EXIF info, I can see that you did not use) which would have taken care of the shadows that are now very visible. Thanks for sharing a nice photo. Good work and keep it up.

  • Good 
  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4269 W: 414 N: 6836] (42744)
  • [2006-10-24 22:37]

Hi Qadir

Good dof, but the highlights are slightly over exposed. Tfs!

Very cute boy. Good lighting & composition.

  • Great 
  • cse Gold Star Critiquer [C: 276 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-10-31 9:56]

Selam Doctor Sherif,
Selam Bhayia,

This is a very good portrait of a very sweet kid. I wish you wouldnt cut the top of his head. and there is shadow around his eyes. i wish you would choose another angle for direction of the sun light..
On the other hand i liked this portrait. TFS.

Best wishes,
Cihan Selcuk Eksi

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