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Photo Information
Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-06-22
Categories: Humorous
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix Z1
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Just Black and white [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-10-29 3:37
Viewed: 414
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
The doors behind the
destroyed love were closed,
the world is now gray
while you get out...
my life I remain locked
up right to half of the nothing,
without doors neither windows...
without desires neither hapyness...
who said to you that you left?...
who said to you that you did not fight?...
if, I... in a starting of madness...
in a starting of ill jealousy know it...
I were... when the glances were not crossed...
I know... i remember...
but you had not left,
you knew that my words were not certain...
i was crazy... crazy not to be to your side...
not since I had wanted;
now my love is late... too much late love...
you have get out by the door
without taking your key,
and I have remained locked up
without being able to open it...
in case you returned...

Today there was no note that to put, or not him encounter felt much to this image, improvises this small poem... for my dear D.
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To Jorge: gracias Jorge..drackness 1 11-04 03:22
To John_F_Kennedy: thanks Achimdrackness 1 11-01 18:40
To valari: I promisse youdrackness 1 10-30 04:23
To pozaru: thanks Vlad...drackness 1 10-30 04:22
To ioana_tm: Thanks!!!drackness 1 10-29 22:41
To mburraco: Saludos Mauro..drackness 1 10-29 18:58
To Suerte: hi Sarahdrackness 1 10-29 18:44
To hay_kes: HI Hayatidrackness 1 10-29 18:35
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Hi Luis,
Very interesting Shot.Good point of wiew.Excellent and different B&W compo.Best regards.

hAyAti

great mood, perspective, frame and poem.
tfs

El poema se lleva las palmas... la foto está un poco fuera de foco. Aunque, creo que logra mantener el clima del poema!.
Muy buen armado.

Saludos!

Mauro

Hi dear friend,
perfect poem for such a lovely photo. Like the idea.

All the best,
Ioana

Hi Luis,
Very interesting Shot.Just small afraid me:)
Look why I like cats more:)
warm regards to you from Foxy!
val

Wonderful image and poem.
I like the como and the B&W choice but I suggest you a darker version.


v

Great note
Achim

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  • Jorge Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 128 W: 6 N: 26] (417)
  • [2006-11-03 21:22]
  • [+]

Me gusta tu foto Luis. Buen punto de vista, me encanta el blanco y negro.
Saludos,
Jorge

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