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* Passing by Clouds *


* Passing by Clouds *
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Copyright: Javad Tabrizchi (jaja1970) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 299 W: 17 N: 236] (1109)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-11-05
Categories: Nature
Camera: Pentax *ist DL, Sigma 28-300mm f3.5-6.3 DG Macro, Kenko ND4 77mm
Exposure: f/7.3, 4 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-11-14 7:03
Viewed: 769
Points: 20
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* Passing by Clouds *
It was last week, when I saw the full moon in my way I decided to take some pictures of sky at night.
When I reached home took my camera and tripod and went to roof. It was cloudy and thin clouds were passing rapidly by the moon.
So I mounted the camera on tripod and pointed to moon. With different expo and f numbers I took pictures which I choose this one for TL.
For reducing the light of moon I used a ND4 filter on my 300mm lens.
I also made some PP job for adjusting light and contrast on this picture.
Hope you love it.

Best Wishes,

Jay.
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To Cat_Mouse: Thanks.jaja1970 1 11-19 08:10
To cepekdonk: Thank you.jaja1970 1 11-15 01:41
To hay_kes: Chock Mamnoon.jaja1970 1 11-15 01:37
To rgagnon: Thanks.jaja1970 1 11-14 12:24
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Hello Javad,
I agree with Sky, this is a great shot but in my pov, a bit blurred.

I'm not sure that using a ND4 was a good idea... It took you down to 4 seconds... providing more chance for vibrations (even on a tripod)... the, you wrote that you used a UV and a ND4... again, im my pov, this is not a good idea depending on the optical quality of those filter you automatically add blur to the shot and that may explain the "vignettage" on your picture when you have two rings in front of the lens.

Richard

good and very mystique picture ! i like it but the moon should be sharp !

Selam Javad dostum,
Very beautiful photo.Nice artwork, really estethic compo. Congratulations.
i made a workshop.

hAyAti

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1666 W: 136 N: 1263] (6138)
  • [2006-11-15 7:53]
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Hello Javad,
Nice shot, I like the clouds in front of the moon it creates a mystic mood. Nice tonal range, but the moon is placed a bid to much in the middle for my liking.
All in all a wonderful shot.
Sky

Hello Javad
Excellente composition en noir et blanc
bravo

jojo

Nice try for Moon catching... well done!

Malik & Mary.

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  • lion Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 598 W: 66 N: 31] (5814)
  • [2006-12-04 15:03]

Nice!
Very beautiful shot.
I like that clouds and the Moon behind.
Well done

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1412 W: 130 N: 3837] (15946)
  • [2006-12-09 16:33]

Javad,
I love your moon shot... The clouds give it a mood! :) Wonderful job!

Tricia

hello! great shot! very romantic view! TFS
Have a nice week!

Hi Dear Javad
A nice shot of mahtab khanoom ! Well done and well seen .
TFS & Keep in touch
Saman

There is a sense of movement in this shot ... interesting effect.

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