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smile....
Photo Information
Copyright: aksana cojocaru (abranda) (45)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-30
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/2.9
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Smiles [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-12-07 9:43
Viewed: 1066
Points: 21
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
......i know that my face is little bit overexposed but it will be better next time....
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Nice smile, good bright photo - i think perhaps a little soft but still works very well. I think a tighter crop might improve it but well done aksana.

s.

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  • NecipP Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 669 W: 16 N: 404] (4722)
  • [2006-12-07 10:12]

Beautifull girl nice eyes and smile I think the light was too strong/exposure blown highlights. The focus point appears on the threads of the sleeves probably because you got too close beyond the minimum focusing distance. keep clicking look forward to more from this model :-)

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  • sak Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 354 W: 14 N: 42] (2173)
  • [2006-12-07 10:17]

Hi Aksana,
Nice portrait with appealing soft colours. Well done. TFS.

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  • Dany44 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 296 W: 33 N: 162] (2364)
  • [2006-12-07 10:39]

Nice portrait. The eyes and the smile are very nice but maybe a little too much light around the forehead. Nice POV. Good job. Dany :-)

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  • orkhan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 716 W: 166 N: 367] (3541)
  • [2006-12-07 14:22]

Hi Aksana
Nice portrait. Nice pose of the model.
The face is little bit overexposed, but it's okay.
Good job.

It's nicely done, Aksana! The camera angle is great, but yeah, it was definitely overcooked a bit. I did a workshop but quit as I just couldn't get it right with what there was to work with.

hi aksana
I like the composition and position
very spontanuous
Habe a nice day
stefaan

Privet Oxana
Ochen Kresieva Foto i Devushka ( ti? :S :) )
Ochen Sposibo
Mali

What a great smile on her face. But I didn't like the blur effects. The beauty of the model doesn't mean that the picture is good also. You have to try more.

Attractive eyes, heart breaking smile. ok it will be better next time.. TFS
dehrti Puttar

It Is still a nice smile.

hello abranda
nice potret with nice model

Hi Aksana
Ik like the pic very much.
Especially with the blur!!
The photo look natural and spontanious.
I love it.

Greets, Danny

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