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SwingMeMama
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Copyright: Albert Yang (aysm) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 86 W: 0 N: 41] (493)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12-23
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Canon 350 D
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/100 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-12-23 3:08
Viewed: 355
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi My Dear Friends,

This pic was taken just after early lunch with my daugher and her son's Owen in Singapore's Botanic Garden.
The details are as follows:
Artist: Dominic Benhura
Year: 1995
Medium: Serpentine Spring Stone
Short Note:
"I was inspired by my kids when I was trying to swing them"

Dedicated By
James L. Lacy
President
Rotary International
1998-1999

dated: 12 June, 1999

I do hope you all like it.....and please your valuable critiques.

Many thanks for sharing.

Best Regards,
Albert.
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  • tibig Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 657 W: 26 N: 681] (7565)
  • [2006-12-23 3:38]
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Nice picture, Albert. The sky is a bit too light but the statue looks fine.

Regards,
Tibi

hi Albert
Very nice shot.
thanks for sharing.

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  • Steely Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 38 W: 5 N: 27] (162)
  • [2007-01-02 7:06]

This is a good composition :D

You have included the sky - but not much, that would result in a large patch of glaring white. Startling white skies are patches of desert in an image full of colours.

You've got the banks levelled with the horizon, thats great - for some reason, they eye always catches tilts

The statue is sited on a third of the frame so it doesn't hog the photo unnecessarily but still remain the focus
And you've got a cleared area on the leading edge of the artpiece ( the direction of motion )

Spot metering might give you more bokeh for the background, but that might not be the look you're after

Well shot :)

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