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Oasis


Oasis
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Copyright: Myriam LACOSTE (alcaline) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 292 W: 0 N: 69] (979)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12-17
Categories: Decisive Moment
Exposure: f/2.8
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-12-28 8:33
Viewed: 399
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
There are oasis in big stores .... gazelles come there to have a rest ... to smoke for a while ... to wander quietly ... to sit down ... with their bags lying down by their feet like tributes gained from an endless war ... eyes tired by neons ... slacking down on affluence days ... when other get on their nerves ... when they are too numerous and when their make up is fading away ... I saw tired gazelles there and ... exhausted lions too ...

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  • Ivan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 403 W: 112 N: 270] (3854)
  • [2006-12-28 15:49]
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Bonjour Myriam,
Ce qu'il y a de plus intéressant dans cette photo, ce sont les beaux reflets dans l'eau de la fontaine. Le background commercial nous distrait du sujet principal. Avec une prise de vue en plongée plus accentuée, il aurait été possible de ne cadrer que la fontaine et l'eau. Ce n'est que mon opinion bien sûr. Bonne journée !
Ivan

Hi,Mariam!
Very Electric urban shot!I like lights reflection and atmosphere inside picture!Very modern idea and text of note!
Regards!
Yuri

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