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Bride / Fashion


Bride / Fashion
Photo Information
Copyright: Akhtar Hassan Khan (kotaddu) (68)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12-03
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Beautiful girls [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-01-09 12:22
Viewed: 1565
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 19
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funky picture keep it up

Hi An attractive picture of and attractive bride. Good eye contact. Well done.
Mike

  • Needs Improvement 
  • shahx Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 88 W: 34 N: 58] (656)
  • [2007-01-09 12:33]

Dear Akhtar,

Would suggest you to take out the words in the picture...they are distracting...and also you can reduce the size too.

Cool lighting and nice dark background. I like the POV and the way she seems to emerge from the top corner, with all her jewelry and henna at the left and her face more to the right--> makes for great balance in the compo. Beautiful colors and detail and I love her facial expression. TFS!
-Lara

Hermosos ojos. Muy buenos detalles Akhtar.
Ánimo y adelante amigo.
Saludos, JL.

  • Great 
  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5773 W: 198 N: 2598] (10192)
  • [2007-01-09 12:47]

Hello Akhtar

Beautiful visual, I adore these exotic pictures. pure beauty!
Congratulations, very good taste

Sérgio

  • Great 
  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1467 W: 275 N: 2067] (12660)
  • [2007-01-09 13:44]

Very nice portrait. I like composition and point of view. Looks very interesting to me.

Hi Hassan

Increiblemente fashion y feliz ya que es un dia unico buen trabajo original

Nat

Dear Aktar
ya jo pic hy na builkul bakwas hy weding kay lehyas say eik to ya dolhan bhangee lag rahee hy 2nd ic man thoree ky nechy light ka shado a raha hy nose kay pass bhaee bohat shado a raha hy kay man sahee kha raha hon

  • Great 
  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2660 W: 74 N: 4764] (21701)
  • [2007-04-09 23:55]

Excellent portrait Hassan...
Very sharp and vivid colour tones thanks for sharing.
George

  • Great 
  • Raju (122)
  • [2007-06-08 16:32]

Dear Akhtar,
attractive bride. Good eye contact.
Very nice portrait..................
wel don............
Raju................

  • Great 
  • hama Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 164 W: 0 N: 68] (1259)
  • [2008-04-09 11:20]

Dear Hassan,
Re-load this picture.
Reduce paleness from the face which is ditracting the bridal portrait. Never write your name in the corners that gives the picture an od-look. Reduce yellow from the eyes.
Good Luck

Sarwar

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