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Pigeons
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Copyright: Sochirca Ana Maria (mariuca) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 17 W: 0 N: 1] (113)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-01-14
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Olympus C-765 UZ, 38-380mm built-in, Kenko Circular PL
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/800 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-01-15 7:31
Viewed: 587
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi, everyone! This is my first shot on TL.

Thanks for looking and for any comments.
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Welcome to Treklens Ana Maria and
right away a very good sharp photo photo and nicely donr with the light controls. Little short cut off on top..I would liked have seen the whole top section, but thats minor..Welldone here and again, many happy hours on Treklens. Greetings from Holland
John

Nice shot, Ana Maria! Nice sharpness overall, and the conversion to monochrome works fine. Nicely decentered composition. Good job, and welcome to TL!

Hello Ana Maria
Nice colorful and beautiful tones,I like pigeons. Well done.TFS
Greetings.
H.Ayhan

I like the range of shades of grey in this one. I have one suggestion, which would be to try cropping a bit off the left of the picture (see workshop), to move the focal point so that it's about a third of the way across the picture.

PS. Thanks for the comment on "blue rocks".

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  • smena Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 171 W: 94 N: 14] (483)
  • [2007-06-21 7:23]

Dragut. Nu-s'ce-ai vrut cu umbra aia si cu rama da' poza-i faina.
Salutari.

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