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Floating


Floating
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Copyright: sophia vasilakis (Soph) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 222 W: 0 N: 90] (724)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-08
Categories: Friends/Family
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-01-20 23:29
Viewed: 1041
Points: 17
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a shot of my cousin in Greece Anna, who I must say swims like a fish ever since she was tiny. Her relaxed floating in the ocean just made for a photo. The original shot looked kind of lame so I just changed the tint to make it more interesting

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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To Roswell_Alien1: hi!Soph 1 01-01 13:22
To voodoo: workshop...Soph 2 04-29 02:30
To SylFondacci: Original shotSoph 2 01-22 11:59
To Xalkida: YES..Soph 1 01-21 13:26
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Hello Sofia !
Very nice picture !
Good framing, pov, colours and nice model !
Why did you cut the right side ? Is this the original shot ?
Anyway I like it.
Sylvie

I agree with Syl. Tell us if this is the original shot. If not, you didn't well to cut the right side.

Anyway, this is a very nice and natural photo! Good work!

PS: At your note you said "Her relaxed floating in the ocean...". Which ocean? Do you mean Ioanian Sea?

  • Great 
  • KUAN Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 21 W: 0 N: 27] (574)
  • [2005-01-22 0:05]

here is very intresting colours: blue and pink...
I like composition too
regards
ania

such a beautiful photo of serenity and grace...i love the color you've chosen too...yes, i must agree it would be much better if the right side is left in tact...well done though:)

  • Good 
  • JLJ05 Silver Star Critiquer [C: 27 W: 1 N: 5] (150)
  • [2005-03-26 18:32]

The composition is nice... it already had enough going for it, I dont think you nessecarily had to change the color. It makes her look a little purple. It's bright. Anyway, good job still.

jamie

I like this composition allot. Check out my workshop tell me what you think.
Matt

Good post - piy the arm is cut off, but still a good post with interesting POV. Tim

Great shot. You could tell she is so comfortable with the water.
I like it.
Sandra

Hello again. Well first the crop on the right side of the photo... I like... It's not normal to see something like that, thats way I like, it's bends the rules. I like the color and the composition...

Good Work...

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