Babbling brook

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• hamperium (0)
• [2007-02-02 10:58]
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hi Jean
your POV is ok
but its not sharp..what happend
tfs M.

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• Texan (24)
• [2007-02-02 11:12]
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There is a good shot in here but the focus is messed up.

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• siegerlander (75)
• [2007-02-02 13:59]
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I dont see anything wrong with it ...I like it!

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• Kilted-Arab (9485)
• [2007-02-03 0:03]
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Hi Jean

I'm giving full marks on this as I think you've captured a nice scene and there's a good flow to the water. I attempted a workshop to tweak a couple of things - please take a look.

I'd strongly recommend free software such as Irfanview which would help sharpen the picture.

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• seneca77 (2097)
• [2007-02-03 12:23]
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Hi Jean,

Very pleasing composition and color pallette. I like the moss on the rocks and the movement in the water. Kilted-Arab did a nice job on sharpening it up a little, and I would second his recommendation on obtaining Irfanview - great freeware photo editing program.

Well done - keep posting!

- Bob

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• WTS (1405)
• [2007-02-03 12:44]
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Hi Jean

The various shades of moss are eye catching, I noticed that even the twigs seem to be budding (not like here coated in snow)
Others have commented on the sharpness I thought the softness it created was the effect you may have wanted?
Anyway Kilted-Arab, suggestion is a good one.

Wayne