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Tras la ventana


Tras la ventana
Photo Information
Copyright: Rafael M Rodriguez (lusco) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 25 W: 19 N: 2] (146)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-01-21
Camera: Nikon D70, 28-80mm/3.5-5.6
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/100 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-01-26 11:00
Viewed: 1403
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Una curiosa ventana de una casa tradicional, con una mujer observándome.
PP: he ajustado niveles y he modificado la ventana por la izquierda para hacer la foto totalmente simétrica.
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Hello Ralph, very nice, and very sad at the same time. It looks like the old person is locked in.

Marleen

Looks like she's wondering what it is you are doing. Nice shot.

Wonder composition! The lines are very graphical In there is a mood in the window! It make we want to know how she react after... Move out? Close the curtain? Ask you? I like this one!

I like this one quite a bit. Windows are always interesting to me. But, I like this one even more because of the woman who is looking out. People add and that extra "something." Your pp work is pretty good. I wouldn't have been able to tell that anything was done. Thank you for your honesty. Although, I'm unsure anything need to be done; asymetry isn't always a bad thing.

Whoops! Now that I look more closely, did you miss the wire on the top left (by the corner of the window)?

Thanks for sharing! Good job!

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  • luloto Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 198 W: 11 N: 185] (1991)
  • [2005-02-26 17:40]

Una composición clásica pero efectiva: la simetría. La persona rompe la simetría perfecta y es lo que le da vida a esta imagen. Enhorabuena.

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