First Golf Lesson

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• rychousmama (228)
• [2007-02-10 22:58]
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Hi Karen! I know these facial expressions well, I work as an assistant teacher with kids ages 5 to 14 :). Very nice collage of various expressions that really do show the thrill of learning and success, those looks on a child's face are the best thing to see. The images are sharp and clear and I love the lighting used. I would only suggest making the tones of the photos all the same as the top left and bottom right ones have cool, bluish tones whereas the top right and bottom left have warmer tones (I am guessing this is due to different situations of lighting in the photos). Also, remember to not break the continuity of the photo collage by having the bottom left photo with no distinguishable colors between the sky and frame background. But otherwise a great shot with such a unique concept. It brought a smile to my face. TFS!
-Lara

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• appalcarp (4188)
• [2007-02-11 0:42]
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Hi Karen, is this Maggie? Great capture of the lesson! I remember going out with my wife some years ago and I laughed the whole time, think it was about 165 on 18 holes, we didn't count 'missed strokes,' rough shots or drops, I don't think, LOL. Great 'daily life' shot. TFS.

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• moli (12650)
• [2007-02-11 2:30]
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• PierreFrigon (15465)
• [2007-02-11 8:54]

Excellent montage with these photos.
Is the bottom right a hole in one?
Very well done
Pierre

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• juyona (15465)
• [2007-02-11 17:05]

Hola Karen.
bonitas composiciones de esta niña practicando el golf.
simpática foto... buen trabajo.
saludos

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• doganizler (2272)
• [2007-02-11 18:02]

Hi Karen
Nice work well done tfs..
regards
Doğan İZLER

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• Refugee (25544)
• [2007-02-17 14:52]
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Your youngest Karen? A well executed montage with each image having good colour and detail. Nicely framed and good text work. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘Estuary Reflections I’

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• inaam (1376)
• [2007-05-02 14:59]

Multiple expressions are nicely captured in this post. Excietment is vivid and eye level point of view are adding more charm of view. Beautiful collection. Well done Karen.

Thanks for sharing this image.

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• Hormon_Manyer (2127)
• [2007-11-13 10:50]

Hi Karen,
Very nice collage of the lesson. Seems like she managed to do the shot on the right bottom photo. :) Anyway, the tone of this and the top left photo is too cool, but I like the expression on the girl's face in vrious situations.
Overall, nice work, tfs. Regards, László