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Crystal ship


Crystal ship
Photo Information
Copyright: Patrick Verdant (reveur59) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 430 W: 6 N: 95] (1260)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Canon EOS G Rebel
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-03-01 11:19
Viewed: 693
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Before you slip into unconsciousness
I'd like to have another kiss
Another flashing chance at bliss
Another kiss, another kiss

The days are bright and filled with pain
Enclose me in your gentle rain
The time you ran was too insane
We'll meet again, we'll meet again

So tell me where your freedom lies
The streets are fields that never die
Deliver me from reasons why
You'd rather cry, I'd rather fly

The crystal ship is being filled
A thousand girls, a thousand thrills
A million ways to spend your time
When we get back, I'll drop a line

The Doors

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To pickerpic: Merci!reveur59 1 05-29 12:43
To pat_dub: Merci!reveur59 1 03-20 09:35
To toni_ro: Thank you!reveur59 3 03-13 10:48
To saeedabbasi: Thank you!reveur59 1 03-12 17:41
To tink85: Gracias!reveur59 1 03-12 17:40
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çok güzel ilgi çekici bir kare tebrikler.

Hi Patrick,
I like the colors in this picture... and the Doors :D (perhaps also the fact that I experimented some shots in similar spots on the shore of the Saint-Laurent river)
The composition seems a bit "crowdy", I would have left a single girl to stand for "a thousand girls" (perhaps the one from the left side or, even better, the one in the contemplative mood, from the right)... but that's just me :)
Regards,
Toni.

Hi Patrick ,
very nice image.
well done.
excellent work
Regards
Saeed

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  • tink85 (718)
  • [2007-03-12 16:38]
  • [+]

wow.. love the composition

Intéresant, beau texte.
Pat

salut c cool ce que tu fais avec tes photos

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2728 W: 263 N: 866] (8659)
  • [2007-06-05 21:55]

Ah! Les 3 belles! J'aime beaucoup ce type d'image tout en douceur qui se laissent découvrir et aimer! Superbe composition! Très très joli et poétique! Bravo!
Michel

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