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Foggy Day Afternoon!


Foggy Day Afternoon!
Photo Information
Copyright: Amir Almassi (personaljesus) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 43 W: 0 N: 1] (156)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12-03
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Casio EXILIM EX-Z750
Exposure: f/4.3, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-03-27 20:39
Viewed: 669
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
once upon a time .....
one of those foggy days,me and my old camera we were
sitting beside the river and then just an apple hit my head and that was the moment that i started to
invent electricity and .........
just a joke;)
Good luck every one,


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Nice work with photo ageing. I would try to recompose it a bit by showing more of the river and the boat, and less of the road.

Wonderful sense of mood conveyed in this. I really like the use of desaturation with a yellow-sepia tone. Good contrasts and exposure to show the fogginess in the background. Only thing I would pick on is the slight tilt in the shot. Try cropping barely two centimeters off the top to create balance and go for the rule-of-thirds in composition. Really nice though, TFS!
-Lara

Saludos Amirhossein

la imagen es hermosa y el efecto de antaño ls hace mas bien logrado gracias por compartir


Nat

Nice mood! I love the tones! TFS

Allan

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  • gnc Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 738 W: 10 N: 104] (1449)
  • [2007-03-28 0:02]

I like the atmosphere rendered here. I agree that either completely removing the road snippet or fully integrating it into the picture may be better. Nevertheless, nice shot.
rgds,
Cristian

Hi Amirhossein,
I like this!! Lovely composition, I like the de-saturation and the sepia tonesin this. The slight graininess and fog add to the image I feel creating a moody effect. Well done and TFS Cheers Tina :-)

Moody one!
I like the sepia tones in it.
Well done!
Nuné

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