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Headin' Out


Headin' Out
Photo Information
Copyright: Jim White (jmirah) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 24] (291)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-05-04
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-05-04 15:17
Viewed: 351
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A gulf shrimper heads out into the Gulf of Mexico between Galveston Island and the Bolivar Peninsula
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To Texan: Thanksjmirah 1 05-05 04:43
To toucan1967: Thanksjmirah 1 05-04 16:25
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  • Great 
  • Ejtaan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 981 W: 101 N: 2260] (11415)
  • [2007-05-04 15:35]
  • [+]

Hi Jim,

I do think I would have cloned these dark spots on the right out, they distract quite a bit, and I believe the image is a bit dark.
I realy do however like the view on the boat in full gear out on the way to do it's job! It looks real great!

Cheers,
Anneke

Hi Jim,
Great shot of the fishing boat heading out to sea, the shot has quite bit of noise to it and the dark patches are a distraction, the overall image is a little dark IMO.
Other than that it is great.
I hope you don't mind but I have done a WS for you.
Tfs Andy

  • Good 
  • Texan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 524 W: 49 N: 1] (24)
  • [2007-05-04 20:21]
  • [+]

There is intrustion on the right side the smoke adds a nice touch. Since you are a Galvestionan what happened to the guy who ran his shrimp boat into a Hurricane ran it aground and became the subject of Lyle Lovett's least famous roomate's song "Hurray Hurricane"

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