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Copyright: Jeremy Dunst (shifty9) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 287 W: 10 N: 239] (1751)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-06-05
Categories: Daily Life, Artwork, Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Mood
Camera: Nikon D70s, Nikkor AF 70-300mm f/4-5.6 G, Promaster Close Up +1
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/5 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-06-07 9:39
Viewed: 474
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Just doing some further experimenting with photoshop in creating frames. Nothing too advanced yet everything is new to me.

I adjusted the levels and contrast and cropped a touch of the right side for balance in PS. Also desaturated for B&W. When taking the shot I had my daylights at a low angle for a bit of a different feel from the lights. I also added a frame and title in PS. Hope you like!
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To Tomek: Thanks!shifty9 1 06-08 10:38
To TonyFoto: Thanks!shifty9 1 06-07 10:54
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Nice Idea Jeremy, Good Work. Good choice for the B/W. TFS, regards, Josée

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  • carmia Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 274 W: 6 N: 126] (3292)
  • [2007-06-07 10:36]

I very like your composition. Very good. Good work!! Carme.

Hi Jeremy,
Nice close-up. It seems that the small size photo looks better than the full size one.
Antony

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  • ines8 Gold Star Critiquer [C: 100 W: 0 N: 0] (729)
  • [2007-06-07 10:55]

Very, very nice composition!!!!!
Regards,
ines

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 824 W: 52 N: 418] (10391)
  • [2007-06-07 14:31]

hi JD. nice tight framing. excellent compoisition.
done with taste! Tfs

Oggie

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  • sean (148)
  • [2007-06-07 15:42]

Jeremy , Ithink you take some awsome photos keep on shooting

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1284 W: 47 N: 2934] (16862)
  • [2007-06-08 0:22]
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Very good work Jeremy! I like it and I mean it it is very nice portrait. You choose perfectly that part of face and desaturation was a good move here. Exposure and balance also very nice as well as lighting.
Now about frame - it is ok for me, I like frames - but I would say that title is to big a bit.
Best wishes - Tom

hello GEREMY.
exxellente composition!
good shot!
bravo!
aldo.

Hi Jemremy,

très beau plan rapproché !

Marie

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  • pemi71 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 539 W: 13 N: 59] (2621)
  • [2007-08-05 14:39]

Hello Jeremy ,
Very nice "portrait", I like the expression of your model, composition, colours(B&W) and light effect...
tfs

Petar

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