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Malay Girl 3


Malay Girl 3
Photo Information
Copyright: Hj Jumat Hj Taha (juta) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 139 W: 20 N: 103] (1650)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-10
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): FACES: [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-06-10 5:56
Viewed: 382
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Gadis Melayu berpakaian baju kurung dan memakai tudong.
Please let me know what you think and what i could do to futher improve.Hope you like it.
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To japiey: japieyjuta 1 09-08 04:57
To gavindya: Haldianjuta 1 07-30 19:03
To ruudblok: ruudblokjuta 1 07-05 08:19
To kfreud: kfreudjuta 1 06-11 21:09
To rio: riojuta 1 06-11 21:08
To rewshearer: rewshearerjuta 1 06-11 21:07
To murni: murnijuta 1 06-11 09:35
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Hi Hj
A nice portrait. Good sharpness, light and background. It looks slightly desaturated, the colours could be stronger. I've made a very simple workshop.
Rew

fine portrait
Karl

  • Great 
  • rio Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 140 W: 4 N: 66] (940)
  • [2007-06-10 13:04]
  • [+]

nice portrait hj jumat! the face of the model is very clear and the lighting is great! well done!

  • Great 
  • murni (156)
  • [2007-06-11 1:27]
  • [+]

Hi Boss,
Siapa kan ni model Tuan yang lawa n pandai begaya ni..... Post yang amat menarik..

Very nice portrait
RuudBlok

great portrait,
nice POV and DOV,
but need more up on colors (like rew workshop)
tfs
Haldian

Hi Hj.

AN EXCELLENT IMAGE.
Great in tones and a natural feel.
Her smile is wondrous :)
Salutes.

jean paul

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