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Exponential
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Copyright: Jeremy Dunst (shifty9) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 287 W: 10 N: 239] (1751)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-11-24
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Decisive Moment, Mood
Camera: Nikon D70s, Nikkor 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5G IF-ED AF-S DX
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-06-29 9:42
Viewed: 751
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 68
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Sunset on Jefferson lake, Minnesota on an oddly warm November evening.

**Repost Edit** As I've gotten a better understanding in Photoshop, I've revisited some of my earlier postings. Most were done by "winging it" without any real knowledge of what I was doing. This is a photo I've always liked and was now able to get much more color and detail out of it. I liked what came out of it and thought I'd share.

I adjusted the shadows/highlights, hue/saturation and removed noise. I also cropped into a panorama as it seems to be more fitting for this composition. All was manipulated using 16 Bits/channel. Critiques and workshops are welcome as always! Thanks for looking.

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  • TAY Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 65 W: 11 N: 5] (267)
  • [2007-06-29 9:48]

Woooooow ! nothing to say else.

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  • eev Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 132 W: 57 N: 44] (1217)
  • [2007-06-29 9:50]

Now that's an interesting sky Jeremy. Presenting this as a panorama is a great idea. I am fascinated by the colors displayed here. It is not only colorful but very dynamic.

Geee, what a sunset!
I love elongated panoramic format, but I'd left a little bit more at the bottom for the balance... But really a beautiful picture, Jeremy! Congrats!
cheers
ToM

PS: SEE WS! :)

WOW! This is really nice Jeremy! LOVE the severe angle off the the left, the bright colors are really nice!
B-)
Linda

Hey Jeremy.
Very beautiful. Great dramatic sky. Great colours and reflections. My sister in law lives in Rochester, and maybe we'll get there to visit and see some of Minnesota some day.
Regards from Romania. Steve.

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  • KrL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 520 W: 123 N: 488] (7367)
  • [2007-06-29 9:56]

Bonjour Jeremy,
Effectivement ton travail a "réveillé" cette photo.
Ce nouveau format permet mieux d'apprécier la diagonale des nuages, et la saturation sur le coucher de soleil est magnifique.
Bien joué !

Karèle

Hello Jeremy.
This is great work. Colours are stunning as well as reflections. It's simply beautiful.
TFS
Wojciech

  • Great 
  • kateb Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 514 W: 153 N: 338] (2991)
  • [2007-06-29 10:46]

This is now a very dramatic picture, very effective post processing, great product!

  • Great 
  • letr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1162 W: 419 N: 1111] (6780)
  • [2007-06-29 12:05]

Excellent pp worjk to creat ethe burnnig sky here ...very good work Jeremy !

Leon

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  • dbp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 680 W: 9 N: 97] (4079)
  • [2007-06-29 13:00]

hi Jeremy
amazing shot
great crop
fantastic colours
David

Jeremy,
this is outsatnding.
The lighting is superb and just look at the colours !!
Excellent effort.

Best regards, Daniel :)

Hi Jeremys, wonderful labùndscape at sunset with splendid colors, very well done, ciao Silvio

Hi Jeremy, it's an excellent panorama shot and is highlighting your acquired skill well. I just love shots like this but here, we only get them in spring or fall, the summer is TOTALLY hazy so I have to stick more with 'ground shots,' flowers, animals, and the like. TFS. For some reason, it reminds me of a peacock's (the male's) tail.

out of words........ terrific colours.

Hi Jeremy,
Wow, stunning sunset! Fantastic colours in the sky and on the water! I like the silhouetted trees and the diagonal lines of the clouds! Well done and TFS
Cheers Tina :-)

This should be displayed! very beautiful capture of the sunset! colors are warm and beautiful. tfs
jowhite

hi there, jeremy
glad to see the difference. and of course, it's fine. keep up the good work. good-luck!
cal

hello
like an explosion of colours
great moment captured
wonderful sky !
regards
jo

Merhaba Jeremy
Perfect sunset. I like clouds. Perfect.......

Kerem

Unbelievable colours a great capture.

Hello Jeremy,

WOAAAAAAAAAW!!!!!

WHAT A BEAUTIFUL SHOT.....

Cracking colors and contrast , stunning composition. THANKS.

Malik & Mary.

Hi Jeremy

another beautiful shot, big visual and capture.
I like these marvels, of their lukewarm colors and their silhouettes adorning the landscape.
Congratulations for the look!

Sérgio
:)

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 832 W: 52 N: 418] (10391)
  • [2007-07-03 13:37]

wow JD! your photos are getting better and better!
not a word bro. . . just GreAt! ;)
thanks for sharing.

Oggie

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2498 W: 56 N: 3862] (17484)
  • [2007-07-03 17:07]

WOW Jeremy what a wonderful sky,it will see soon out of like handgemalt. Thanks to for this so good photographic work.
Regards.
Janusz

Hi Jeremy,
Awesome Jefferson Lake Sunset.
I like your sky,colors,reflections,pp work and silhoeuttes.Bravo!
CT

Simply stunning.

A super color explosion
Like the format and symmetry in it
Something special I may say
RuudBlok

Incredible the way it look like a huge kaleidoscope detail! The color are play like a fusion in both side of the contrast, mixing a fire and silk! It was manipulated in a great way!

I didnt see the one before you changed it but this one does it for me. Great colours fantastic reflection.
best wishes
Rob :)

Excellent panorama with very nice, well saturated colours. I like the arrow you created using wisely the reflections in he water. Good chocie for maporama format as well as asymemtrical placement of shore line on the strong spot of the photo. It makes very firm anchor for the photo. I love the evening mood created here. Distracts plane smoke visible on the sky. tfs

Marek

hello Jeremy
...I have burnt the eyes!!!!!!!!!
fantastic shot and excelent work with
the tones and the colors..

cheers sERGIO

  • Great 
  • Capra Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 0 N: 1] (302)
  • [2008-01-21 23:42]

incredible image and colours and composition, perfect for me
regars

Unbelievable sunset. I would remove that white streak in the sky. Why don't I see sunsets like this :). I know they are all different.

God Bless,
Rick

Beautiful landscape and colors Jeremy. I like it but I don't know how appear the white lane in the upper left corner (like an scratch..result of PP or some reflect in the lens?)

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