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America
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Copyright: dustein sibug (dustein) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 0 N: 18] (1755)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-19
Categories: Portrait
Camera: H1a Pentax
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-07-22 4:45
Viewed: 503
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Model: America Atega

Camera: Canon eos 50 Film Cam (thanks to meling for the cam)

Makeup style: Allan

one of my fav foto
one of my difficult photoshoot
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wow 52 views but 0 points.

Ok let's try to give critiques on this one bro.
1. the watermark is a ditraction. keep it small and away from the subject, elese it will still the viewers attention.
2. there are overexpose parts on the subject. Detailes are lost. Is this intentional?
3.the posing is a little awkward for her. Maybe the facial expression or the way her legs are placed.


hope this helps.

tfs!

vaya! esta tambien es preciosa. ya veo que sigue la serie de la chica en el cesped.

en serio, te voy a hacer favorito, porque tienes un trabajo digno para seguir, y aprender!

muchas felicidades!!

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