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In Flight


In Flight
Photo Information
Copyright: Jamie Smith (JLJ05) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 27 W: 1 N: 5] (150)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-07-18
Categories: Friends/Family, Action
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/750 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-03-13 4:05
Viewed: 596
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My big brother Adam, picked my little brother up and literally threw him into the swimming pool at a hotel. It was so funny. This is him mid-air. It means something to me I guess because it was the night before I left for boot camp.

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  • rll76 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 49 W: 0 N: 14] (261)
  • [2005-03-13 10:33]

jamie - this is a really good photo. the color you used along with the filter make it seem like an old photograph... like the ones old people keep in their wooden trunks and dont look at until they're like 95 and then they cry because those pictures means a lot to them. kinda like the meaning behind this one. :)

Especially, I like the vertical composition and the tone you have chosen...Maybe background could be blurred to emphasize the action of him...

Good work.

Can

jamie, i like the tight crop on this photo. the border and filter work well with this photo because it makes the photo seem "old" to me. racheal is right - that is exactly what this photo makes me think of.

Nice shot with a very creative framing and I like the yellow-old effect on the image ...
Congrats and welcome to TL !
Sylvie

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  • Oski Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 41 W: 0 N: 13] (213)
  • [2005-07-21 8:06]

Hi Jamie,

I love this pic. The timing is great, and the hands & legs of the subject forms like a pyramid. The tone provided is also very good. Nice framing.

Cheers,
Arun.

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