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Copyright: Enka Campoy (Enka) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 105 W: 0 N: 0] (600)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-07
Categories: Pets
Camera: Canon EOS 10D, Tamron 28-75 f/2.8
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-08-03 16:26
Viewed: 443
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 14
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A veces, el mundo llega a ser una caja de luz que vemos a través de una ventana, aunque en éste caso creo que la luz la poseen estos dos fierecillas. Muy bonita, estupenda en la parte técnica, pero ante todo, bonita. Felicidades

Ohh, very moody and almost timeless because of the desaturation, the subtle sepia tones, and the crumbling and grainy quality of the building elements. Really good vertical framing with the window off-center and the two children at the lower left. I do find the boy in the dark shirt is a little too central, maybe if you left in a bit more space at the right edge that would help. Really good handling of metering and exposure, because even though the outline of the boys is strong, you can also see rich tones and even some details on their hair and clothes and skin. Beautiful the way the light hits the sliver of ceiling and the window shutter. The low point of view and from behind the boys makes us wonder what it is they are looking at, and that makes the photo have a strong storytelling element. Beautifully done Enka, TFS!
-Lara

"Por qué el amor, cuando lo pierdes, duele tanto? Ya no tengo respuestas, sólo tengo la vida que he vivido. Dos veces, en esa vida, he podido elegir: como niño, y como hombre. El niño eligió la seguridad. El hombre elige el sufrimiento. El dolor de ahora es parte de la felicidad de entonces. Ese es el trato."

Hi Enka,

Excellent shot, very well thought composition, well exposed, very nice olden times mood with the sepia tone. This type of shot can leave the imagination go wild about what they are looking at, with great interest. Commendable work!
TFS,
Vassilis

Entrañable y hermosa!
Saludos
Jacobo

Buen encuadre, el ligero quemado + softness le van... Me gusta su atmósfera! Saludos, Marta

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  • ornis Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 148 W: 20 N: 139] (842)
  • [2007-10-30 6:16]

Bonjour Enka,
This is superb! An image that tells a story, realized with a very good use of light to convey a moody atmosphere. Rich grey tones and adequate softness. The two children pose in front of the window is fantastic. Very good work!
Regards
Jean-Michel

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