SUN SET

Critiques [Translate]

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• Chaga (91)
• [2007-08-12 2:41]
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Hi Rufino.
Your picture needs some composition adjustment, like removing most of the sea, and emphasize more on the nice clouds.
Levels and contrast can also be improved.
I did a workshop, to show what I mean.
Charles
PS: Adding a note to the picture is also a good thing. Some of the critique writer(like me) won't give any point for unannotated pics.

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• kvrnkiran (3285)
• [2007-08-12 3:33]
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Hi Rufino,

Lovely sunset. I like the sun rays and colors. TFS.

Kiran.

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• tomek_wap (4640)
• [2007-08-12 5:29]
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Nice view, great colours.
And captured sun rays coming towards us away from the sun.

I would just level the photo.

Tom

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• coed1992 (5629)
• [2007-08-12 6:04]
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hi rufino,
you captured a very nice sunset, the rays are spectacular striking the clouds up,is this Jumeirah beach sunset? though might need a little tilt to left and little enhancemant of contrast and levels.anyway,welcome to TL bro, thanks for sharing.
with compliments...............andres

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• skellywag (853)
• [2007-08-12 6:14]
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Hi, this is a beautiful sunset, the colours could use some saturation and the horizon straightening though. I like Tom's WS. Regards, Jean

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• rmsruidera (129)
• [2007-08-13 5:33]
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Hi Rufino,

This image has an enormous potential to turn out into a very good composition as the clouds, the water and the sun were not over exposed. It needs only some minor corrections is photoshop.

I'm not very good in photoshop but I'm really enjoying doing enhancements especially if it turns out into something that will impress me personally.

to view my workshop


I hope you'll like my version. Keep on shooting Rufino.

Best Regards,
RAMSES