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Old cold see


Old cold see
Photo Information
Copyright: Michal Wysocki (mikolos) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 14 W: 0 N: 7] (446)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-01-10
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Pets, Experimental
Camera: Canon 300D, Tamron 28-75, Marumi 67 mm UV
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-08-13 13:17
Viewed: 489
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 6
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this is experiment (PS)
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Ok, you wanted to present an old photograph and it looks old; but the ship in the background is not old at all.

Serge

Czesc Michal,
Bardzo mi sie podoba ta fotka - ladnie dopracowana, ma fajny klimat. Osobiscie kojarzy mi sie z przedwojennymi filmami:) Robi wrazenie!
Pozdrawiam,
Iza

Hello Michal,
I very much like the idea of showing us an old looking photo with much grain and in brownish tones. I think this can perfectly apply to contemporary sceneries ( with modern boats ;-) ): it creates an interesting mood.
However, I have some difficulties with the foreground, which looks too "complicated" to me and detracts the attention from the rest of the photo: in my opinion, there are too many elements that are not sufficiently distinctive (birds, dark stones, the concrete (?) thing on which the birds sit). So, I would have preferred just the dark stones and, perhaps, some birds. Such a simple foreground with a contrasting dark colour would have given more depth to yo picture. But it's true you don't always choose your setting ;-).
Anyway, thanks for sharing & kind regards,
Erik

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  • Connie (180)
  • [2007-11-17 6:24]

Very evocative, it touch the soul!

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