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**Water Lily**


**Water Lily**
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Copyright: Mohd Rozaimi Hj Abd Rahman (AJ786) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 743 W: 57 N: 1045] (6681)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04-28
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D-80, Nikon 18-200mm VR, Hoya UV HMC
Exposure: f/11, 1/50 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Aquatic Flowers [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-08-17 3:03
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Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 94
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi Colleagues and Friends. Today post is a continuation of Brunei flower series. I captured this image some time ago when i started, thus the present of the noise. I hope the frame is not too much for some viewers as i am currently practising with the PP work on making a decent frame.

Hope you enjoy it and thanks for the support.

Cheers
AJ786
;-)
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Very nice shot...

Hi Rahman,

Lovely capture!! Nice colors and reflections. Nicely framed. The line at the bottom of the flower is disturbing a bit. But, that could only to me. Nice capture. TFS.

Kiran.

Hi! OK, I have to say I'm not to sure about the frame, I think it is a bit dominant for my personal tastes...BUT, the image itself is great!

Well composed, good colours and details and a nice reflection as well - good shot!

My friend,

I love it all!
What an amazing creative shot!
Lovely colours and reflections!

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Hi there my friend

I like it, lovely compo and yes the frame is bright but I think it adds to the overall effect really well. Lovely work, keep them coming

TFS regards Helen

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  • juta Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 139 W: 20 N: 103] (1650)
  • [2007-08-17 3:57]
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SALAM BRO,
Very pretty, amazing colors and a beautiful frame.
Regards,JUTA

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  • stery Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 330 W: 24 N: 71] (2036)
  • [2007-08-17 4:18]
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Hy
Very nice reflection, great color and pov
Great work
Regards
STERY

Hi Mohd :o)
I like it ! Even the frame, so vivid, like a neon around the shot ! Great reflection on water, excellent POV and colours, congrats ! TFS
Cheers
Marylou

Bravo, Mohd.
Wondertful picture, fantastic frame you used, good work.
Jan

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  • moody Gold Star Critiquer [C: 115 W: 1 N: 1] (49)
  • [2007-08-17 4:39]
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Wow, it is fantastic.
Lovely reflection and nice composition with good framing.
Cheers, Moody

Askum Shabat.
Very nice image and creative.
Lovely reflection and nice composition.
Weldone

Hello Mohd

Beautiful visual, I adored his pic, fantastic shot and the wonderful colors and breezes of this whole green.
Well composed, good colours and details,
Congratulations

Sérgio

Hello Mohd,

Beautiful water lily and reflections in water.
Fresh colors and nicely composed. TFS

Vandana

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 5 N: 389] (1376)
  • [2007-08-17 6:37]
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Hello Mohd,

You have taken a beautiful image of this pretty water lily. Placement of the subject is excellent as reflection is looking fantastic on the water surface. Fine presentation in good luminosity. Well done brother.

Thanks for sharing this image.

Hi AJ,

It's a beautiful picture . . Lily and the revlection . . Excellent compo and framed . . Foto yang sangat menarik . . Saya sangat suka dengan foto ini . .

Salam,
Tjutjut

hi there, i like the frame and of course the image is really nice, good composition with the reflection too and the colors are great, thanks for sharing, scott

Hello Mohd ,
well-seen and well-presented...
good shot
tfs

Petar

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  • tibig Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 657 W: 26 N: 681] (7565)
  • [2007-08-17 8:49]
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Nice composition and colours, the image has a pleasant softness in it.
Regards,
Tibi

Beautiful, nice framing, nice color saturation, I like it, Mohd!
Linda
B-)

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1012 W: 81 N: 66] (12244)
  • [2007-08-17 9:24]
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Daer Mohd Rozaimi Hj Abd Rahman,
very delicate and picturesque image of water lily flower.
not cubic but plane picture fits this pale colors, and not real flower but its reflection is more clear and realistic, then the sun lights not that pond but this photo image, I feel so. this is photography of you, and the air of your space.
thank you,
Akihisa

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1273 W: 0 N: 189] (13118)
  • [2007-08-17 9:41]
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Hello!
Lovely colours and reflections! Great shot!
Thanks
Regards
Diane

hello rozaimi!
excellent portrait of this beautiful water lily, great colors and reflection.
i like it.
tfs
zoran

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1407 W: 130 N: 3827] (15905)
  • [2007-08-17 11:20]
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Very pretty shot... love the pink on the flower.. the lilies are prefect! and the reflection is outstanding...
As for the frame IMHO I often use black..
But keep trying it is a ton of fun and they really can big out new things in our photos.. (once again IMHO!!!!)


Tricia

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  • lion Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 598 W: 66 N: 31] (5814)
  • [2007-08-17 11:32]
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Wow, I like this warer flower :).
Great shot and colors, and a reflection is perfect

Great bright sunlit green and pink colors. Nice sharp image well composed. Well done.

TFS!
Reid

Very nice shot, Mohd, I like the reflection in the water so much, thanks and greetings
Sabine - wishnugaruda

Nicely captured. Good saturation and good composition. Maybe a faster shutter speed would give you more depth and subtlety, and that frame, in my opinion, is too attention-grabbing.
But nice work overall
Rew

Salam Bro,

Inda lagi tegamit eh, TL ani... sibuk bro masani... btw actually fromthe begining you are already talented, you have your angle you have your idea, just to add some salt and sugar inside it, I don't think you have those problem now... cheers

Amri HMS

Hola amigo,
precioso trabajo,
y reflejos,
sensacional colores y detalles,
saludos

Hi AJ78 (by the way, what it means? :)
water beauty! I like the reflection. Maybe a little more free space around the flower uncentering it would make it perfect. Nicely seen. TFS

Have a sunny happy day my friend!
Ioana

ps: I'll be back soon with :)

Hie Rozaimi,

Although it's not as sharp as i expected, but your presentation of this photo makes it all. Good continuation of the series.

TFS,
Hong

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2239 W: 172 N: 0] (28920)
  • [2007-08-19 5:30]
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Hi Mohd ;)
great macro, reflection, colors...TFS
Best regards,
J ;)

merhaba my friend mohd
magnificent water lily.wonderful colours and reflections.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

good shot of tis teratai, bro AJ.. aku suka frame cuma x suka ijau yg mcm kena highlight tu.. apa pon well done..


regards, terry

welldone bro..lawa pic nya..nah dua point..TFS

cheers
dimi

hello my friend! lily well spotted and captured! TFS

hi Bro...
Congrats for this photo.
great shot in all aspect. colours, focus, detail, POV and DOV. for all... this is good and nice photo. but I have a bit consent with something like a pole or shaft upper the lotus leaf, why u not take of it before you shot :)
tfs
Haldian

Hi Mohd,
A perfect picture in respect of the technical parts, excellent sharpness on the liley, superb reflection. Two remarks, increasing the saturation might improve the image and regarding the frame; for me it is distrative, but that's a personal taste. Overall a magnificent posting my friend!
TFS
Hans

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  • isa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 354 W: 57 N: 697] (4107)
  • [2007-08-23 4:14]
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Hi Mohd,
Interesting shot, good composition and beautiful reflection.
Well Done,
Best Regards,
Isa

(*) Thanks for the critice in "O amor é o amor..."

Hi there.
Very nice picture,good colours and composition.Well presented.
Best Regards
TFS

* Piotr *

Great reflexion, good colors and beautiful waetr lily

Hi!
Great picture with good and well saturated colors.You chose a great point of view and the frame is also very nice!
Tfs,Jonas

hello! this is so beautiful! ezxcellent prasentation! TFS
Aga

Hello AJ786,
Lik so many other Trekkers I like the colour contrast that attracts my eyes!
Red and green always works nicely together, and when you offer a fine reflction like this the pleasure is double...
A well composed image!
Greetings,
Pablo -

the photo is beautifull

this is nicely done, like the details on presentation, and overall image. Attractive colour, fun to look at.

Lovely capture!! Nice colors and reflections. Nicely framed.

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